2011年新经典中考英语作文大全_百度文库
http://wenku.baidu.com/view/bb220c02a6c30c2259019e44.html中考备考必背范文十五篇
一、旅游叙事类范文：
An Unforgettable Trip to the Beach
During the summer holiday, I went to a beautiful beach with my parents and had an unforgettable trip.
I will never forget the views there. The sunshine was bright and it seemed that the sea was shiny, too. The sky was blue and so was the sea. There were no clouds in the sky and the sea was calm. What a beautiful picture it looked! I was a little afraid of the water. Thus, I was only lying on the beach. A gentle wind blew, I felt peaceful.
However, when I heard the laughter of the people in the sea, I couldn’t help joining them and we played with the water happily. Of course, my fear about the sea was fading. Soon, laughter surrounded the beach…
At last, we took a walk along the sea when the sun was setting. I found that when I was close to nature, nothing was more beautiful than it.
Our trip was a great success. Time goes by, but the sweet memory will be carefully kept in my mind.
A Special Holiday
Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. I had a very good time there and it was the most unforgettable holiday I’ve ever had.
The weather there was quite different from that in Beijing. The sky was crystal clear and we could see all kinds of birds flying in the sky. The temperature was neither too high nor too low. During the vacation, what I like best was the day when we went to the beach. Almost all day we walked on the beach and I picked up many shells while my parents were taking photos of the beautiful sea. Later in the afternoon, we sat down on the beach and watched the sunset. “How beautiful it is!” I put myself and the beauty of mature together in my mobile phone. During those days, we also went to buy some traditional food and gifts. Finally, we left with the deep love of Qingdao.
This trip is the one that I’ll never forget. Although time goes by, the sweet memory will be carefully kept in my mind forever.
二、写事类范文：
A Special Experience
My name is Wang Bing, yesterday was my birthday, and talking part in the volunteer activities might be my most meaningful birthday gift.
It was a fine day yesterday. I got up early so that I could reach the Children’s Hospital on time. I had a quick breakfast and called up my friends. Then we took a No.3 bus and arrived at the hospital at 8:30. To my surprise, all of the young patients had beautiful faces full of sadness. so we decided to do something to cheer them up. We took out the presents that we prepared for them before, not expensive but filled with encouragement. We sang and danced, played games, and when they were tired, we told stories to them. Before long, they were happy again. That made us pleased and got a sense of achievement. After that, we left with happiness.
I came back home at 15:30, I was tired but happy, so helping others is my biggest pleasure.
An Forgettable Day
Yesterday was my birthday. I had a meaningful and unforgettable day which I’ve never had.
In the morning, I got up early and did everything really fast. At 7:00 am, I left for the Children’s hospital with excitement. Holding some small presents in my hands, I walked into the ward to meet the sick children. They were really happy when I got into the room. Laughter surrounded the room and there were big smiles on the children’s faces. We chatted and joked, and sang songs together.
Time flew, and it was time to say goodbye. the children were a little sad, and I even saw tears in their eyes. But they were glad that we had a really happy time.
Although I didn’t go to the amusement park to enjoy my birthday as usual, I had a really unforgettable day. Because of my visit, the children were happy, so I was happy. I would always remember the faces of the children forever.
三、写人类范文：
My favorite classmate is Florida. She plays an important part in my life. She is lovely and friendly. We usually get on well with each other, because we can reach an agreement all the time. We always talk about something interesting with each other, and she can always come to the top in the school exams. So she often helps me solve problems in my study with patience. When I fail in the exam, she usually encourages me and makes me happy again. Some people say, “A true friend can give you a hand and touch your heart,” So, Florida is a true friend for me, isn’t she?
There are many people that we meet in our lives, but only a few will make a lasting impression in our mind and hearts. It’s these people who we will always remain as true friends.
I will never forget you. My friend, Florida…
The person I want to thank is my English teacher. She is about forty years old. She is tall and thin with long black curly hair. As for a teacher, she loves teaching and teaches us with patience. You can always see a big smile on her face.
Her class is really interesting and useful. She teaches us not only much knowledge but also many skills on how to learn English well. These skills even can help us with other subjects. All of my classmates love her lessons. When we make mistakes, she is very strict with us, but she doesn’t scold us. She often encourages us not to lose heart and treat us as her own child. With her help, I made some big progress in English last term.
She is also a really kind teacher. When someone has some problems, she will help him. when someone is ill, she takes good care of him. After class, she is easygoing. We all get on well with her, so we often play games with her and make fun of her.
We all know our grades can cheer her up, so we must work hard in order that our teacher can smile every day.
Hans Christian Anderson
Hans Christian Anderson was a world-famous writer of fairy tales. He was born in 1805. When he was eleven, his father died. His family was then so poor that he could not go to school during his childhood.
At the age of fourteen, Andersen went to work in a theatre. Later helped by some warm-hearted artists, he went to school. In 1828, he began to get advanced education.
After graduation, Andersen devoted himself to literature. He wrote plays, novels, poems and so on. He worked hard at literature. This led to his great success. He wrote more than 160 fairy tales in all. He was famous for his funny tales, which became popular all over the world. He died in 1875.
Liu Huan
Liu Huan, one of the most popular singers in China, was born in Tianjin on August 26th, 1963. He is able to sing songs of different styles, ranging from pop music to rock music and from Chinese folk songs to foreign songs. He is not only a singer but also a composer.
He has achieved great success in music. He sang and composed hundreds of songs, most of which are very popular all over our country, so he was honored many titles. He was also invited to write and sing songs for international sports meeting, including the 11th Asian Games in 1990.
Liu Huan is a man of various abilities. Besides the talent in music, he is interested in many other things such as tourism, literature, collection and arts.
四、环保类范文：
As citizens of the world, we must take some actions to protect our planet. Maybe we can start with the small things in our daily life. First, we should train ourselves to from the habit of saving the water and paper as well as turning off the lights when we leave the room. In addition, walking to school or to work instead of taking the bus can also reduce the waste gases. Apart from that, we also have the duty to spread the ideas of protecting the environment. We can call on the public to plant trees and stop the factories from pouring the dirty water into the rivers. You know, the more people join us, the more things can be done, so that the better our environment will be.
However, nothing will change if we just think but don’t do it. So, hurry up. Let’s do our best to save our planet.
But is there nothing to do to save the earth? The answer is obviously no. Actually there are several methods we can take to make our environment better. First, the government should prevent factories from pouring dirty water into the river. Second, we’d better plant more trees. It’s not only a way to make our city look more beautiful, but also a good choice to improve the environment. Third, we are supposed to ride buses or bikes rather than use cars when we go out. And finally, form the habit of saving energy. Always remember to turn off the lights when you leave the room and try to use less water in your daily life.
We have to know, the earth is our own home and also our only home. Now our home is suffering from a terrible disaster, can we just stand there and watch it happen?
五、图表调查类范文：
We did a survey about middle school students’ hobbies. Here are the results. from the diagram we can know that most students agree to surf the Internet. Besides, half of the students are for eating snacks at school. Moreover, nearly all the students disagree to wear school uniforms to school every day.
In my view, students should be allowed to eat snacks in the classroom, because they always feel hungry. If they don’t have enough food, they won’t concentrate more on their studies. In addition, I don’t agree to spend lots of time surfing the Internet. Most students can’t help playing computer games, so sometimes they forget to do their homework.
In a word, students will study better if they have good habits.
We did a survey about middle school student’s hobbies. Here are the results. As can be seen from the diagram, most students reach an agreement in surfing the internet. First, surfing the internet can broaden our vision and we can learn what we can’t learn at school. Secondly, it’s a good way for us to relax ourselves. Having facing so much stress, we do need to have some fun. However, this doesn’t mean that we can spend lots of time surfing the Internet, oppositely, we should use it in a good way so that it can benefit us.
Moreover, although nearly all the students disagree to wear schools uniforms, I think we should. Because as students, our main mission is to study well, not just thinking about how to dress up ourselves all day. And wearing school uniforms helps us save the time that we may spend in choosing clothes so that we can concentrate more on our studies.
All in all, no matter what kind of hobbies we have, we should be sure that it’s good for both our studies and lives.
六、提建议类范文
Dear Tom,
I’m really happy to hear from you, but I’m sorry to hear that you have some annoying problems. So don’t worry, I will try my best to help you.
As for the weather, it’s always dry in Beijing, a good advice is to drink more water. You will get used to it. Well, about /Chinese, it’s really a problem for you. But fortunately, you are in the environment of Chinese, you should try to speak Chinese as much as possible and don’t be afraid of making mistakes. In that way, you’ll make progress. Being new here, I know it’s be afraid you. You’d better try to make as many friends as you can ,and if you feel lonely during the Anyway, remember, I’ll always be your best friend.
Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to write to you and I hope that my advice can help you some way.
First of all, I’m sorry to hear that you feel uncomfortable because of the dry weather. However, I figure that eating more fruits, drinking more water can help you get out of that trouble. As for your language problem, why not consider joining a Chinese club where there are good Chinese native speakers? Communicating with them on any popular topic can be fun and good for your listening and oral Chinese. In addition, I know that it’s hard for someone to get on well with foreigners at first, but if you smile more to the people around you, your friends will surely show up!
In a word, I do hope you can gradually get used to your new life. I’m looking forward to your good news!
七、变化对比类
假设你是李明， 你的美国朋友杰克听说你校正在开展研究性学习，来信询问有关情况，请你写一封信，谈一谈开展研究性学习前后，你的学习情况的变化。
注意：1用书信格式。2词数：80左右 3 生词：研究性学习exploring study。
过去
现在
课堂
老师讲解知识点，学生听讲，记笔记。
老师提出问题，学生互相讨论或学生自己提出问题自己讨论解决。
课后
完成大量的作业。
丰富多彩的课外活动，如读自己感兴趣的书籍， 去图书馆或上网查资料。
Dear Jack,
How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in our school. In short, things have been improving since the school began to carry out exploring study. In the past, the teachers always kept on explaining the points in class. We students just listened and took notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raised by the teachers or ourselves. After class, we enjoyed different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We can go to the library or surf the Internet for various kinds of information.
In a word, we are now masters of study, and we are happy.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
中考书面表达评分标准
评分标准
第一档
(13 – 15)
第二档
(9 – 12)
第三档
(5 – 8)
第四档
(0 – 4)
内容要点
要点齐全
观点正确
要点齐全
观点正确
要点不齐全部分内容符合题意
与题目相关内容不多
句式词汇
句式多样
词汇丰富
句式词汇基本满足要求
句式词汇单调平乏
简单拼凑句式词汇
语言表达的准确性
个别错误为丰富语言而产生
少量错误不影响理解
错误较多影响理解
内容难以理解
语言的连贯性
( 逻辑)
具有逻辑性
中考作文写作技巧
I．主题句
1. It’s necessary
important
common ﹜ for sb. to do sth.
difficult
impossible
enjoyable
1. It’s one’s duty to do …
II． 观点
1. I think … not only… but also…
2. I don’t think …
3. In my opinion, …
III．主旨内容
1. Here are my suggestions:
First of all , … What’s more , … Besides , …
2. As a student , I …
I can do …as long as I ….
in order to do …, I will do …
I do … as much as possible.
Because it… not only… but also …
…so that…, which is the best …I can do
IV．结束语
1. The more…, the better…
2. Don’t you think this is …?
3. I’m sure that …
4. I believe that …
5. Don’t give up. It will be all right soon.
杜德红老师简介：
2003年毕业于吉林师范大学，曾教授过大专、中专、中高考等课程。八年的丰富教学经验深受家长和学生的认可。课堂知识丰富、气氛活跃，知识点精炼清楚。已培养出成百的中高考高分学生，是实力派的老师。现为乐加乐英语中考教研中心首席教研员，负责初三讲义的编写和制作。
中考英语书面表达背诵范文（二）
一、Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .
二、Save the earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .
It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better .
三、Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?
We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don’t spit in public places . Don’t draw on public walls . It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .
四、Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It’s very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .
五、Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldn’t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home . We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have . Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.
六、Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful .
七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It’s very quiet . What a nice place I live in !
八、How to learn English well
As we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ?
The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .
九、How I learn English
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . It’s Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . That’s all .
十、How I improved my English
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.
Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.
十一、The importance of English
English is the most widely spoken in the world. It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge . English is used by travellers and business people around the world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.
English is so useful that we must learn it well . Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class .
十二、I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.
十三、I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on , I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true.
十四、I like the Internet
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s very useful. I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.
The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try ?
十五、The Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. It’s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot .
十六、Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest computer is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.
十七、The importance of water
Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.
However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes . Some factories even pour waste water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink .
Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves .
十八、Water
Water is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is necessary for all plants. They need water to grow. People can’t live without water. Plants will die without water. It is important to all living things. However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time we should save as much water as possible.
十九、I like sports
I feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible .
二十、Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei . I was born in Fuzhou on December 15 ,2000 . I’m studying at Yucai Middle School. I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite sport is football. My hobbies are drawing and computer. I’m very happy to live in a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each other very much .
二十一、My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .
