初中生写作现状：“六大病症”
1、审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯；
2、单词拼写错误：frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet …
3、动词缺失：Eg: I happy I can go to Peking.
4、前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）
eg: All people have their own dream. He said he wants to have a good rest.
5、中式英语（Chinglish）：Eg: I very like sports.
6、综合性错误：单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。
中考英语高分作文的特点
1、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题；
2、段与段之间，自然过渡，有合适的连接词；
3、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体；
4、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等；
5、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩；
6、分段合理，全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子；
7、首尾呼应，自然成一体；
8、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了；
9、字数达标，要点齐全；
10、书写工整，卷面整洁，少有涂改痕迹。
中考英语高分作文的写作要点
1、根据实际情况，在文章当中交叉使用长短句；
2、综合使用各种所谓的“高级”结构；
3、适当选择恰当的连词来表示文中的并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，并且注意句子结构的变化，避免重复和单调；
4、在适合的语境当中，在自己十分有把握的情况下，使用名言警句来增加文章的色彩；
5、不鼓励原创的语言，尽量使用平时老师批改过的，教材中有的，自己十分熟悉和有把握的语言；
6、文章字数必须达标，要点要写齐全；
7、书写工整，卷面整洁，尽量避免涂改；
8、考试中的写作是一种控制性写作，在至多25分钟的时间内要实现审题，列提纲，打草稿，修改草稿，打磨语言，并准确，美观地誊写在答题卡上。
如何逐步培养和提升英语写作能力？
（1）词汇短语：词汇是学生用英语表达思想,同时也是写作的基础和源泉。
1. 词汇的巧妙记忆（children; believe…)；
2. 加强中考考纲词汇、短语的听默写；
3. 坚持课外阅读，并用“积累”本收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆；
4. 多使用“高端”的词汇。
Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in
I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
=gets in the way of
= have a bad influence on
（2）句子：词不离句，完整、准确、新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好文章的必备条件。
“多样”的句式变换
1）合并为简单句；
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress.
= I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .
2）学会使用感叹句；
Eg: It is necessary to help others.
= How necessary it is to help others！
3) 善用复合句；
Eg: a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble.
= We need to help the people who are in trouble.
b. We know that more and more students like pop songs.
= As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.
4）巧妙使用强调句；
Eg: We can achieve our dreams by working hard.
= Only by working hard, can we achieve our dreams.
5) 积累丰富的谚语 (一周两至三句）；
英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能增强文章的说服力和感染力。
试感受下列句子在使用谚语前后的区别
As the saying goes, “ .”
1) 锻炼对学生有好处
（未使用谚语）It is good for us students to take exercise.
（使用谚语）As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”
2) 集中注意力于学习
（未使用谚语）We should concentrate our mind on our studies.
（使用谚语）As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.”
其他谚语:
1. Think twice before you do. 三思而后行。
2. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。
4. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。
5. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，疾病远离我。
6. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马。
7. Every coin has two sides. 凡事都有两面性。
8. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
（3）篇章：词不离句，句不离篇。能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语法，谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练写作的最终目的。
如何运用已有的“遣词造句”能力在写作实践中学会“谋篇布局”，“战无不胜”呢？
作文常用连接词语
►转折：but, yet, however, though, although
►时间、顺序：first , second, next, and, then, after that, finally
firstly, secondly, finally (last but not least)
at the same time, from now on, in the end, at last
►递进：besides, also, in addition, also, not only...but also, what’s more
►解释：in other words, or, that is
作文常用词语
►因果：because, because of, therefore, so, as a result, thus
►例举：such as, like, for example, and so on
►肯定：of course, certainly
►对照：instead, instead of, on the contrary...
►总结：Generally speaking...
To tell you the truth...
Believe it or not...
All in all...
In a word ...
On the whole...
For these reasons...
That is why ...
As we all know... = As is known to us ...
►转化话题：In my opinion...
In fact...
By the way...
I am afraid...
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