2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷1）
It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76. __________
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77. ___________
was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78. __________
have been telling me how great my writing was. 79. __________
So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80. __________
of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful 81. __________
help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living 82. __________
near my house, who was a very much famous writer. 83. __________
He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84. __________
advices on how to write like a real writer. 85. __________
76. 正确 77. on改为in 78. or改为and 79. have改为had
80. they前加what 81. were改为was 82. gentleman前加a 83. 去掉much
84. reading改为read 85. advices改为advice
2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷2）
Christie was one of my best friend at high school. 76. __________
At that time, we often spend time together. 77. __________
Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78. __________
study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79. __________
other words, we would be separated for long time. 80. __________
Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81. __________
my best wishes to him. She said it was the best 82. __________
gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83. __________
kept touch with each other through e-mails. I 84. __________
look forward to see her again in the near future. 85. __________
76.friend→friends 77.spend→spent 78.Thank→Thanks
79.√ 80. for后加a 81.去掉off 82.him→her
83.has→had 84. kept 后加in 85. see→seeing
2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（重庆卷）
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, 76. __________
a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you 77. __________
tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody 78. __________
else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you 79. __________
need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some 80. __________
words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes 81. __________
him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to 82. __________
offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you 83. __________
some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and 84. __________
trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with 85. __________
them.
76. how改为what 77. secrets后加with 78. talks中s去掉
79. good前加a 80. hear改为hearing 81. is改为are
82. happily改为happy 83. to去掉 84. advices中s去掉
85. spent改为spend
2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
An English lady was finally decided that she really should 66. __________
learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her 67. __________
driving test and told her husband that, to celebrate, he 68. __________
was going to drive him over to France for a holiday, But 69. __________
then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that 70. __________
they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your 71. __________
mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well, it is all because 72. __________
of the business of driving on right.” she said, “I have 73. __________
been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldn’t 74. __________
get used to it—in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。” 75. __________
66. was去掉 67. past改为passed 68. he改为she
69. √ 70. after改为before 71. How改为Why
72. by改为 in或with 73. on right间加the
74. couldn’t改为can’t 75. peoples改为people
2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（辽宁卷）
Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.
1 except for that中的for去掉
2 talk many中的many改为much
3 she worn中的worn改为wore
4 although改为even
5 attractively改为attractive
6 seemed后加to
7 classmate变为复数classmates
8 closest改为close
9 their chemistry中的their改为our
10 begin改为began
2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（浙江卷）
After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby
table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things
were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put her arm
around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me,” said Mother cheerfully.
1 I notice中的notice改为noticed
2 occupy改为occupied
3 young couple前加a
4 clearly改为clear
5 on their table中的on改为by或at
6 put her arm中的put改为putting
7 so many of中的many改为much
8 accepted to it中的to去掉
9 So I didn’t think中的So改为But
10 Neither did me中的me改为I
2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西卷）
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!
1 we are shopping中的are改为were
2 picked up中间加it
3 at a price中的a改为the
4 on his T-shirt中的his改为her
5 try hardly not to中的hardly改为hard
6 wanted get中间加to
7 It was turned out to be中的was去掉
8 that she’d left中that改为which
9 as embarrassing as中的embarrassing改为embarrassed
10 for I just中的for改为but, yet, while或and
2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（课程标准卷）
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold, he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card say, “24 cents each.” “You will never sell these for that much,” he told Nick. Convinced, Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moment’s delay, my neighbor picked up the box but announced, “I’ll take them.”
1 me story中间加a
2 very interested中的interested改为interesting
3 come by中的come改为came
4 on the yard中的on改为in；或on the yard中的yard改为ground
5 a box of golden ball中的ball改为复数的balls
6 a card say中的say改为saying
7 Nick has brought中的has去掉
8 price up to中的up改为down
9 my neighbour中的my改为his
10 but announced中的but改为and
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（辽宁卷）
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per weeks. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on
television, there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The
commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation, there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because the rate remained above the previous level.
1 were steady中的were改为was
2 per weeks中的weeks改为单数的week
3 visitors to中的to改为from
4 was the immediate中的the改为an
5 who directly中间加was或is
6 decided to making中的making改为make
7 They wrote中的They改为He
8 explained for quite中的for去掉
9 Follow this中的Follow改为Following
10 because the rate中的because改为although, though或but, yet
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国大纲卷）
Dear George,
It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now 76___________
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77___________
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78___________
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79___________
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80___________
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81___________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82___________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83___________
was really a nice experience. If you’d like to make trip to 84___________
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85___________
Yours,
Mike
76 after改为since 77 them改为us 78 for改为with
79 √ 80 much去掉 81 staying改为stay
82 day改为days 83 fly改为flew 84 trip前加a
85 better改为more
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标卷）
My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
1 buy a ticket中的buy改为buying
2 a friend here中的here改为there
3 for long holiday中的for后加a
4 but turned around中的but改为and
5 on my pocket中的on改为in
6 was those中的was改为were
7 luggages改为luggage
8 at my friend中的friend改为friend’s
9 lent to me中的to去掉
10 I feel中的feel改为felt
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国1卷）
One of my unforgettable memory of my school in 76___________
Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. 77___________
I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to 78___________
school. The smell from it was very good．Since the lunch 79___________
bell finally rang，my friends and I met under a tall tree 80____________
and had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used 81____________
to share her Nang with me．Nang is a specially kind of 82____________
cake in Xinjiang．I like them very much．Now Aigulie and 83____________
I study at different colleges or we can only see each other 84____________
during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss 85____________
the food and the good time we had together．
76 memory改为复数形式的memories
77 lunches前加the
78 hold改为held
79 Since改为After
80 √
81 was去掉
82 specially改为special
83 them改为it
84 or改为and
85 over改为of
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66___________
morning and was always late with work. His boss wanted to 67___________
fire him if he didn’t start coming on time, but he went to 68___________
the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69___________
medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70___________
The man did as told and slept really well, wake up before 71___________
the alarm had even gone off. He had time for a properly 72___________
breakfast and was still the first reach the factory. “Boss,” he 73___________
said , “that medicine really works!” “I’m pleasing to hear 74___________
it,” said his boss, “but where were you yesterday?” 75___________
66 troubles改为trouble
67 late with work中的with改为for
68 but改为so
69 for a help中的a去掉
70 take them中的them改为it
71 wake up中的wake改为waking
72 a properly breakfast中的properly改为形容词proper
73 the first加to
74 pleasing改为pleased
75 √
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西卷）
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favorite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
1 make a new film中的make改为making
2 one of my favorite actor中的actor改为复数形式的actors
3 but I rushed中的but改为so或and
4 to get之后加it
5 they have finished中的have改为had
6 everywhere改为anywhere
7 I was really disappointing中的disappointing改为disappointed
8 walked out a building中的out后加of
9 in the front of中的the去掉
10 did I had中的had改为have
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（浙江卷）
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age. I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin
again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
1 cousin改为cousin’s
2 rich改为richer
3 on particular中的on改为in
4 put into中间加入it或that
5 enjoy to playing中的to去掉
6 faced my cousin中的faced改为face
7 Late on中的Late改为Later
8 pulled out the toy slow中的slow改为slowly
9 She knows中的knows改为knew
10 and ever mentioned中的ever改为never
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（重庆卷）
Today is Sunday .I’ve been in Canada for two months.
This is the first time that I’ve been away my family for such a 76___________
long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I’ve 77___________
soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like 78___________
many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79___________
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80___________
is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81___________.
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82___________
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83___________
we are planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia 84___________
will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been 85___________
to China several times. I just can’t wait.
76 for改为from 77 me改为mine 78 live改为living
79 are改为is 80 meet改为met 81 hardly改为hard
82 family改为families 83 or改为and 84 the去掉？
85 who改为whom
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标卷）
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That’s it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.
1 and little中的little改为less
2 each of my toy中的toy改为复数形式的toys
3 did wrong中的did改为went，或在did之后加go
4 and broke it中的it改为them
5 parents bought me中的parents前加my
6 see which was中的which改为what
7 I tear中的tear改为过去式tore
8 more toys to you中的to改为for
9 I must make中的must改为could或might
10 my toys to last中的to去掉
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国大纲卷）
Every one of us can make a great efforts to 76.___________
cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all 77.___________
of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only 78.___________
when we have a real need. That won't be easy, I know, 79.___________
but we have to start anywhere. What’s more, we can go to 80___________
work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy 81___________
smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our 82___________
everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, 83___________
how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the 84___________
lights or television when no one else was there? 85___________
76 去掉a 77 off改为down 78 去掉to
79 √ 80 anywhere改为everywhere
81 and改为or 82 Other改为Another
83 electric改为electricity 84 leave改为过去式left
85 television后加on
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国2卷）
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. 76.____________
Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live 77.____________
without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 78._____________
without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. 79._____________
Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. 80._____________
To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all 81._____________
out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no 82._____________
drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find 83._____________
ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._____________
water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 85._____________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
76 you opinion间加my
77 animal改为复数形式的animals
78 or改为nor
79 seemed改为seems
80 we改为them
81 a改为the, this或that
82 though改为because, since或as
83 √
84 using改为used
85 去掉for
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西卷）
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
1 visit Beijing中的visit改为过去式visited
2 but it is easy中的but改为and或so
3 go to anywhere中的to去掉
4 comfortably改为comfortable
5 were the free中的were改为was
6 shared for中的for改为with
7 taking in中的taking改为taken
8 several local dish中的dish改为复数形式的dishes
9 such great hotel中的such后加a
10 any friend of me中的me改为mine
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
Dear Mom,
Mother’s Day is coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad 66.___________
and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you. 67.___________
Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you 68.___________
before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell 69.___________
you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not 70.___________
only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good 71.___________
person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though 72.___________
I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your 73.___________
part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. 74.___________
Hope you good health and much happiness every day! 75.___________
Your little girl, Jennifer
66 √ 67 your改为you 68 thank改为thanks
69 on去掉 70 by改为for 71 teach改为teaching
72 had改为have 73 may后加not 74 Whenever改为Wherever
75 Hope改为Wish
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（浙江卷）
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
1 two years before中的before改为ago
2 rented for a car中的for去掉
3 Unfortunate改为副词Unfortunately
4 at least two week中的week改为复数形式的weeks
5 so I did中的so改为but
6 they will be中的will改为would
7 about myself中的myself改为me
8 so farther away中的farther改为far
9 interested stories中的interested改为interesting
10 knew truth中的truth前加the
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（重庆卷）
Dear Grandpa,
How are you those days? I have been missing you very 76.___________
much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of 77.___________
the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I 78.___________
was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories 79.___________
till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant 80.___________
view there. You told me the name of different plants and their 81.___________
characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology 82.___________
and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now 83.___________
my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study 84 .___________
and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since 85. ___________
we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
Yours,
Daisy
76 those改为these 77 after改为since 78 happily改为happy
79 child前加a 80 fall改为fell 81 name改为names
82 interesting改为interested 83 into去掉 84 are改为is
85 use改为used
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（辽宁卷）
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love, Fiona
1 we have中的have改为had
2 kin for you中的for改为of
3 Unfortunate改为Unfortunately
4 for a result中的for改为as
5 six mile中的mile改为复数形式的miles
6 unless改为until或till
7 park here中的here改为there
8 as car drove out中的car前加a
9 They finally中的They改为We
10 our own way to home中的to去掉
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标1卷）
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
1 holding改为hold
2 passes改为passed
3 much改为well或clearly
4 shoulder改为shoulders
5 towards改为to或into
6 himself改为him
7 he was strong改为and he was strong
8 in a fact改为in fact
9 during改为when
10 never改为ever
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标2卷）
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
1 read of中的of去掉
2 Have tea中的Have改为Having
3 that might not be中的that改为which
4 soon becomes中的becomes改为became
5 of day中的day前加the
6 Interesting改为Interestingly
7 by the中的by改为with或to
8 drank from中的drank改为drunk
9 good cup中的cup改为cups
10 the grow中的grow改为growth
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国大纲卷）
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
1 with his work中的with改为on
2 so he works中的so去掉
3 have made中的have改为has
4 his healthy中的healthy改为health
5 That is which中的which改为what
6 visit to中的visit前加a
7 her room中的her改为his
8 step into中的step改为stepped
9 the picture中的picture改为复数形式的pictures
10 as many as中的many改为much
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国大纲卷）
In my family, there are three people. My father is
hardworking but goes to work in the field every day 76______
He isn’t good at talk but he gets on well with other 77______
people. My mother is very kind and is 78______
friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem 79______
I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. 80______
When the teacher asks us very difficulty questions, 81______
I’ll think quickly and stand to answer. At home my 82______
father often thinks I’m silly. He said if I decide 83______
to do something, it takes him much times to stop me. 84______
This is how I need to improve in the future. 85______
76 but改为and 77 talk改为talking 78 much去掉
79 the改为a 80 √ 81 difficulty改为difficult
82 stand后加up 83 said改为says 84 times改为time
85 how改为what或where
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
1 the test difficulty中的difficulty改为difficult
2 tried hardly中的hardly改为hard
3 asking me中的asking改为asked
4 let her to copy中的to去掉
5 After think中的think改为thinking
6 all of us中的all改为both
7 same answers前加the
8 in the tests中的tests改为test
9 so she would中的so改为or
10 does she在的does改为did
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西卷）
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
1 go fishing中的go改为went
2 ours fishing中的ours改为our
3 so we中的so去掉
4 Before waiting for在的Before改为After
5 impatiently改为impatient
6 and my中的and改为but
7 there were a在的were改为was
8 and fish was caught中fish前加a
9 the next few minute中的minute改为minutes
10 Felt hungry中的Felt改为Feeling
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（浙江卷）
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matter bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall asleep.
Good night and remember, you, dear-diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
1 350 miles far away中的far去掉
2 we move last week中的move改为moved
3 find other one中的other改为another
4 my classmate中的classmate改为classmates
5 or just中的or改为and
6 make matters bad中的bad改为worse
7 first day中的first前加the或my
8 tiring改为tired
9 fall sleep中的sleep改为asleep
10 is my only中的is改为are
2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标1卷）
Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden. Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
1 five years before中的before改为ago
2 with the help by中的by改为of
3 these year中的year改为years
4 we had been中的had改为have
5 As result中加入a
6 somewhere改为everywhere
7 juicy and taste中的taste改为tasty
8 so much that中的much改为many
9 but we have中的but去掉，或改为yet
10 wonderfully改为wonderful
2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标2卷）
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with afterschool activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friend.
1 They are three lessons中的They改为There are
2 didn’t need中的didn’t改为don’t
3 so many homework中的many中的much
4 have more time with中的with改为for
5 for one and a half hour中的hour改为hours
6 My dream school look like中的look改为looks
7 all kinds of the flowers中的the去掉
8 sat by the lake中的sat改为sit
9 listening music中的listening后加to
10 kind and helpfully中的helpfully改为helpful
2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国大纲卷）
All of us need friendship. The understanding 76
between two friends mean both of them have similar 77
ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78
impossible for him to help each other and to make 79
their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship 81
should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82
wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83
The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84
one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85
76 √ 77 mean改为means 78 trusting改为trust
79 him改为them 80 to去掉 81 really改为real
82 able前加be 83 that we中的that改为as
84 for改为from 85 but改为and
2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西卷）
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
1 wanted teach中间加to
2 come along中的come改为came
3 have our barbecue中的have改为having
4 immediate改为immediately
5 on the bird中的on改为at
6 Neither改为None
7 was flying中的was改为were
8 把they were looked中的were去掉，或把looked去掉
9 but fortunately中的but改为and
10 a impressive中的a改为an
2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（辽宁卷）
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbours, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
1 bothers to us中的to去掉
2 several time中的time改为times
3 understanding改为understand
4 have been disturbing中的have改为has
5 Beside改为Besides
6 a average中的a改为an
7 she starts中的starts改为started
8 how closely中的closely改为close
9 our apologies中的our改为your
10 figure后加out
2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（浙江卷）
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.
1 had noticed中的had去掉
2 noise and中的noise改为noisy
3 comes to check中的comes改为came
4 but became中的but改为and
5 searching后加for
6 from his owner中的his改为its或the
7 a ticket中的a改为the
8 previous改为previously
9 strangers改为stranger
10 on need中的on改为in
2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
1 talk with中的with改为about
2 go off中的go改为goes
3 wait your teacher中的wait后加for
4 and classmate中的classmate改为classmates
5 and trying中的trying改为try
6 quiet and calmly中的calmly改为calm
7 put out a fire中的a改为the
8 lead us back中的us改为you
9 when someone中的when去掉
10 missing and hurt中的and改为or
2015年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标1卷）
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
1 I think I would中的think改为thought
2 in countryside中加the
3 or the mountains中的or改为and
4 on the development中的on改为with
5 has been polluted中的been去掉
6 seriously改为serious
7 airs改为air
8 Much rare animals中的Much改为Many
9 must found中的found改为find
10 your environment中的your改为our
2015年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标2卷）
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a ship window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, tony saw parents. Mum said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
1 with his parent中的parent改为parents
2 on a ship window中的on改为in
3 so very much that中的very去掉
4 After looks中的looks改为looking
5 where his parents were missing中的where改为that，或去掉where
6 begun to cry中的begun改为began
7 and telling him中的telling改为told
8 outside a shop中的a改为the
9 saw parents中的parents前加his
10 terrible worried中的terrible改为terribly
2015年浙江卷
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
1 three side中的side改为sides
2 from glass中的from改为of
3 sit close中的sit改为sitting
4 easy see中的easy改为easily
5 is also splendid中的is改为was
6 around them中的them改为it
7 could not enjoy中的not去掉
8 in hurry中加a
9 made me felt中的felt改为feel
10 If I was中的If改为Although或Though
2015年四川卷
Hi, Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
1 want share中的want后加to
2 tell you last time中的tell改为told
3 three new friend中的friend改为friends
4 sing in中的sing改为singing
5 costs me many中的many改为much
6 so I’m afraid中的so改为but
7 How do you think中的How改为What
8 If you are me中的are改为were
9 talk to him在的him改为them
10 help with me中的with去掉
2015年陕西卷
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favourite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuit with happy laughter!
1 in last week中的in去掉
2 anything special中的anything改为something
3 the better biscuits中的better改为best
4 I decide to ask中的decide改为decided
5 some basic step中的step改为steps
6 were really well中的well改为good
7 after I was packing中的after改为when或while
8 At a party中的a改为the
9 just get some中的get前加to
10 me enjoy改为me enjoying
2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国1卷）（山东+安徽）
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
1 that I live在的that改为where
2 but the restaurant中的but去掉
3 had to wait中的had改为have
4 honest改为honesty
5 or high quality中的or改为and
6 using for cooking中的using改为used
7 dreams后加of
8 in the short period of time中的the改为a
9 our business中的our改为his
10 grow steady中的steady改为steadily
2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国2卷）（全国2卷适用地区：青海、西藏、甘肃、贵州、内蒙古、新疆、宁夏、吉林、黑龙江、云南、辽宁、海南）
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go to a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knoweledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
1 how to do中的how改为what
2 can chose中的chose改为choose
3 and take a trip中的take改为taking
4 but there is中的but改为and
5 about world中world前加the
6 broaden your view中的your改为our
7 knowledges改为knowledge
8 suggest we can中的can去掉，或把can改为should
9 I thought that中的thought改为think
10 cost many中的many改为much
2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国3卷）
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
1 the teenage year中的year改为years
2 the best and worse years中的worse改为worst
3 At the first中的the去掉
4 by yourself中的yourself改为myself
5 think such中的such改为so
6 tell me what to do中的tell改为told
7 freely from them中的freely改为free
8 by wear strange clothes中的wear改为wearing
9 leaving home to college中的to改为for
10 whenever need中加I
2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.
1 so she has to do中的so改为but
2 most of the houseworks中的houseworks改为housework
3 Both Dad or I中的or改为and
4 get up中的get改为got
5 went on shopping中的on去掉
6 in her hand中的her改为his
7 in kitchen中加the
8 what I cooked中的what改为that或which，或去掉what
9 favoritest改为favorite
10 moving改为moved
2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（浙江卷）
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
1 a very young children中的children改为child
2 well years late中的late改为later
3 at end of中的end前加the
4 greet her中的her改为him
5 who we was中的was改为were
6 not to knowing中的knowing改为know
7 have had a drink中的had去掉
8 they chat中的chat改为chatted
9 in the top of中的in改为on
10 excited改为exciting
2017年高考英语，全国1——短文改错
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop in the middle on the road.
命题人所提供的答案为：
1 eighteen改为eighteenth；
2 first day前添加the或my；
3 so once中的so改为but或yet；
4 goes blank中的goes改为went；
5 repeating the word中的word改为words；
6 Turning left中的Turning改为Turn；
7 so much nervous that中的much去掉；
8 A few minutes late中的late改为later；
9 a suddenly stop中的suddenly改为sudden；
10 in the middle on the road中的on改为of。
2017年高考英语，全国卷2——短文改错
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every da. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful information from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
命题人所提供的答案为：
1 all work中的改为both或去掉all；
2 a hour中的a改为an或one；
3 they are interesting in中的interesting改为interested；
4 that is on the中的that改为which；
5 get up earlier中的earlier改为early；
6 bought for some中的for去掉；
7 Beside, they often中的Beside改为Besides；
8 useful informations中的informations改为information；
9 summer came中的came改为comes；
10 invite their students pick中的pick之前添加to。
2017年高考英语，全国卷3——短文改错
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physical, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took. I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
命题人所提供的答案为：
命题人所提供的答案为：
1 realize之后的of去掉；
2 I had grown中的had改为have；
3 and also中的and改为but；
4 was took中的took改为taken；
5 and become中的become改为became；
6 in picture中填入this或the；
7 they were very中的they改为that或which；
8 difference kinds of中的difference改为different；
9 the late music albums中的late改为latest；
10 your high school days中的your改为my。
2018年2月18日
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