专题21书面表达
考点4 叙事描写类
（一）（2022·新疆·中考真题）
初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如：1.一次难忘的旅行
2.一次难忘的比赛
3.一次难忘的志愿服务
……
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lotof sweet memories…
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【答案】例文
Looking back at these past three years, Ihad a lot of sweet memories.
Last summer vacation, I decided to learnto swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good inthe water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, butI couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move andswim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I wasvery excited and proud of myself.
What I learn from this experience is thatnothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（二）（2022·甘肃武威·中考真题）
以“being lost”为主题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
The pictures are provided to help you think aboutthis topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you planyour composition.
●Where was Mary?
●What was Mary doing?
●What happened to her?
●What did Mary feel when seeing her mother?
The following words may help you:
●crowded with visitors
●so interested in the animals
●no one around
●turn to …
要求：
1.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息；
3.在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possibleversion:
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on alovely Sunday afternoon. The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the gate ofthe zoo stood two pretty giraffes. Mary had never seen such amazing animalsbefore. She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every smallmovement of them carefully. After a while, she wanted to tell her mother whatshe’d found about these animals. However, she noticed there was no one around.She was afraid and worried, but she remembered that her mother told her not tomove when being lost. So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo.Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. When seeing hermother, Mary was happy and ran to her mother.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，结合图片提示进行详细地描述故事的发生以及过程及结果，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧密结合所给出的要点内容，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
（三）（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）
亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。
内容包括：
1.你对这位老师的印象；
2.你感谢他（她）的原因；
3.你对他（她）的祝福。
注意：
1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当举例或拓展；
3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior schoollife. I’m here to say thanks to_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
It’s time for me to say goodbye to myjunior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. Sheis very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came tothis school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me somegood advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sadabout it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve myEnglish. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankfulto her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in thefuture. I hope she will become better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（四）（2022·天津·中考真题）
假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。
（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。
（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。
（4）人们过来帮忙。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：被吹倒be blowndown 挡住block 树枝branch 树干trunk
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
DearDavid,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
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Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a storywith you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, shesaw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hongsaw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunkagain. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. Whenother people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to helpher. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.
I think she is a very kind person. Andfrom this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help.It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hearfrom you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（五）（2022·云南·中考真题）
ILearned How to ________
提示：人生是一个不断学习、进步的过程。通过学习，你掌握了某种技能，明白了某些道理……请以“ILearned How to ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你的一次学习经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
I Learned How to Learn English Well
At the beginning of middle school, Ialways got bad grades in English. I was very upset and didn’t know how to learnit well.
One day, my English teacher talked to meand understood my problem. She gave me some advice like speaking more. Fromthat day, I made an English study plan. First, I listened to English songs orwatched English movies. Second, I listened to teacher in class carefully andtook notes. Thirdly, I took part in the English corner. I communicated withothers as much as possible in English. Finally, I have great progress inEnglish.
From this experience, I know that when youface some difficulties, don’t give up easily. You should find some ways to dealwith them. You will success one day.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我学会了如何学好英语”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己在学习英语的经历；最后一段介绍自己从这次经历得到了什么感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（六）（2022·浙江宁波·中考真题）
为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动 (a series of labour activities)，假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数80-100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Time
Things I learned
My feelings
March
grow vegetables and plant trees
…
April
repair things like electric fans…
May
…
Let’s Enjoy Working
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【答案】例文：
Let’s enjoy working!
This term, I took part in a series oflabor activities in our school. I was happy that I learned a lot.
In March, I learned to grow vegetables andplant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things likeelectric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned todo much housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor and foldingclothes.
I think the labour activities are not onlyeducational but also useful. I’m sure the more life skills I have, the more independentI will be.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己参加的学校组织的一系列劳动实践活动的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
（七）（2022·重庆A卷·中考真题）
科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。
要求：
1.80-120词；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1.起因，经过；
2.结果，感悟；
3.……
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【答案】例文
A study shows thathappiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood hasan influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.
I have a good friend andher name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her.She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheerher up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy dietand do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident.
From this experience, I learn thathappiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（八）（2022·重庆B卷·中考真题）
有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English Coner 将进行“ControlYour Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。
要求：
1.80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇：anger n.[U] 愤怒
1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）
2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）
3.……
ControlYour Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved aproblembetter?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger andsolved a problem better? Here is my experience.
Last term, I bought a magazine that I hadalways wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it.But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When Ifound it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helpedme when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship betweenus. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told himthat he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, ourrelationship became stronger.
From this experience, when we are angry,we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is tocommunicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better.
Thanks for listening.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文以“ControlYour Anger and Solve Your Problem”为题，结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决一件小事，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
