2024年3月9日雅思解析 | 写作月计划完美命中！

今日写作考题

Task1: Table（静态图：2003年六个国家对家庭、工业和农业用水的百分比）

Task2: Some people think success of life is based on hard work and determination, but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion?（重复2020年9月9日考题）

题目分析

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本文是近期【写作月计划】最后一天的练习原题！题目本身不难，唯一需要注意的地方是题目两个讨论点都分别含有两个例子，第一个是 hard work and determination，第二个是 money and appearance，在写的时候都需要针对性地说明。

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Introduction: Both hard work and determination and money and appearance are of necessity to lead a successful life.

Body1: Hard work and determination definitely helps.

- Today's professionals must work long hours to keep their heads above water, let alone to get ahead in life financially. The endeavor and determination of employees can help them to get promoted, thus a step closer to successful life.

- Those businessmen who are determined to become the iconoclasts often rise to the top in newer industries because they can catch attention of consumers and keep up with the vagaries of consumer tastes instead of obeying the traditional ways.

Body-2: There are also good reasons why having money or good appearance also help us succeed.

- Money would give an advantage to those who want to start their own business.

- There are always cases that good appearance helps entertainment stars earn their fame.

In conclusion, hard work, determination, money and good appearance are all important factors with regard to success.

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