建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外,还要求在信中针对别人的问题,给出你的观点及解决办法。常见的写作模式为;
1 首段;表明写作意图,陈述事由。常用句型有;
It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on----
I am writing to express my views concerning...
You have ask for my advice on...and I will try to make some suggestions.
2 主体;提出建议并阐明理由。常用句型有;
I would like to suggest/recommend that...
If I were you, I would...
It seems to me that you could...
In my opinion, it would be wise to take the follow action.
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can...
I wonder if you have considered the following.
As to…..I suggest that you should...
3结尾;鼓励收信人接收建议。注意要有礼貌,使对方容易接受。
In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.
Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions.
I believe you will take my advice into account /consideration.
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.
【佳作欣赏】
假如你是某中学的学生李华,请你给校委会写一封信,就开办一个艺术画廊给出自己
的建议及理由,内容包括;
1)建议开办一个校园艺术画廊,展示在校学生自己的作品;
2)画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台,开阔学生视野、传播校园文化
Dear Committee members,
I wish to make a suggestion about starting a school art gallery.
There are many students who are good at painting in our school. The school art gallary can
provide these students with a very good platform to display their own paintings, and through the art
gallary, other students may not only get a chance to admire the artistic achievements and
the development of school culture but also can widen their knowledge. If you were to offer
such an opportunity to the students who are fond of art, I believe they would give you a big
surprise.
I would be more than happy if my suggestion could be considered.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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