英语作文《开学第一天的感受》这样写（附初、高中例文）

 

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小编提示：

  亲爱的同学们，新的学年开始了。来到了新的学校、新的班级，认识了新的老师、新的伙伴，你一定有不一样的感受吧。如果要写一篇英语短文，叙述一下开学第一天的感受，那要如何下笔呢？

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初中学生适用：

”开学第一天的感受“

1. 文章主题：

描写你在新学校的所见所闻，让大家分享你的快乐。

2. 谋篇布局：

A. 先介绍学校的外观，然后具体就某事或某个有特点的人进行叙述和描写。

B. 用一两句话表达自己的第一印象和感受。

3. 遣词造句：

A． 习作应用第一人称和一般现在时进行叙述和描写。

B． 除了运用be动词之外，学会运用一些简单的实义动词，如like, look等。

C． 介绍学校时可用：My new school is ... There is / are ... in our school.

介绍人物时可用：She is / looks ...

【例文】

My first day in school

Today is September 1st. It’s the first day of a new term. I’m very happy because I’m a student in Chengli Middle School.

The school is very big and beautiful. There are so many teachers and students. They are very friendly. I’m in Class 2, Grade 7. Miss Liu is our head teacher. She teaches us English. She looks very strict. In our first class she told us what we should do and what we shouldn’t do in school.

I like my class, teachers and my classmates.

【教师点评】

小作者用简单的语言叙述了自己开学第一天对学校、老师、同学的印象，字里行间流露出自己的真情实感。作为七年级的学生能写出这样完整的、思路清晰的短文，确实不错。比如There are so many teachers and students这句中的 There be句型是初中经常要用到的，使用时应记住：There is+单数名词或不可数名词；There are+复数名词。

另外，文中还运用了She teaches us English和She looks very strict 等句子，因句中主语为第三人称单数she，所以句中的谓语动词也要使用第三人称单数形式。同学们在写作时一定要注意，千万不要因粗心大意而忽略此用法。

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高中生适用：

”如何用英语描述开学第一天“

【写作指导】

一、审题定调

本写作体裁为日记，主要描述开学第一天的所见及所感。写作时要注意要点全面，层次清晰。本写作以陈述当天发生的事为主，故时态以一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。

二、谋篇布局

本写作的格式已给出，故只需写正文部分。

正文部分可分为三部分：

第一部分：描写校园环境；

第二部分：描述你对老师和同学们的印象；

第三部分：表达自己的感受。

三、组织语言

第一部分：描写校园环境

普通表达：

◆When I went into the school, I found it so beautiful.

◆Green trees and different kinds of flowers are here and there. Our school seems like a big garden.

◆When I went into my school, I saw a tall teaching building. On the top of it our national flag was flying.

◆The air had the smell of flowers. It made me feel relaxed.

高级表达：

◆Entering through the school gate, I was amazed at its beautiful scenery.

◆With green trees and different kinds of flowers everywhere, our school looks like a big garden.

◆ On stepping into my school, I saw a tall teaching building, on the top of which our national flag was flying.

◆ In front of it was a beautiful garden and the air was filled with the smell of flowers, which made me feel relaxed.

第二部分：描述你对老师和同学们的印象

普通表达：

◆ All my new teachers are kind and patient.

◆They use different teaching methods.

◆She used a new method of teaching. I had never experienced it before.

◆ All my classmates are friendly and hard-working.

◆I hope many of them will be my friends. / I hope to make many new friends.

高级表达：

◆Then I was happy to find that my new teachers were not only enthusiastic but also experienced.

◆Their teaching methods seemed new and effective.

◆I was attracted by her new method of teaching, which I had never experienced before.

◆All my classmates are friendly and brilliant.

◆I’m looking forward to making friends with them.

第三部分：表达自己的感受

普通表达：

◆I can’t forget my first day at Senior High school.

◆I think I’ll have happy high school days.

◆I will make progress here.

高级表达：

◆My first day at Senior High school made a deep impression on me.

◆I’m sure I’ll spend my high school days happily.

◆I believe with excellent teachers helping me, I will make great progress here.

普通范文

September 1st, Thursday                          Fine

Today is my first day at Senior High school. ①When I went into the school, I found it so beautiful. ②Green trees and different kinds of flowers are here and there. Our school seems like a big garden.

③All my new teachers are kind and patient. ④They use different teaching methods. At the first lesson, I felt nervous at first, but I was soon relaxed after our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves to each other. Besides, all my classmates are friendly and hard-working. ⑤I hope many of them will be my friends.

⑥I can't forget my first day at Senior High school. ⑦I think I'll have happy high school days.

高级范文

September 1st, Thursday                         Fine

Today is my first day at Senior High school. ①Entering through the school gate, I was amazed at its beautiful scenery. ②With green trees and different kinds of flowers everywhere, our school looks like a big garden.

③Then I was happy to find that my new teachers were not only enthusiastic but also experienced. ④Their teaching methods seemed new and effective. In the English class, Mr. Smith, our foreign teacher fromAmerica, told us about his interesting experiences inChina. Besides, all my classmates are friendly and brilliant. ⑤I'm looking forward to making friends with them.

⑥My first day at Senior High school made a deep impression on me. ⑦I'm sure I'll spend my high school days happily.

温馨提示：同学们，仔细阅读两篇文章之后，你会发现相同标号的内容采用了不同的表达方式来表达相同或相近的含义。因此，大家在平时的写作中，应该多使用一些复杂结构或高级词汇，同时，也应学会使用简单词汇或句式来表达复杂的意思。