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上一期，小编分享了“观点对照型”和“原因分析型”写作的模板。这一期，我们来学习下图画作文和图标作文的写作模式。
图画作文写作思路是固定的：描述图片、阐明观点、给出建议。
第一段，重点描述图画内容。对图画内容的描述可以用图画中人物的对话。简要描述即可，不用发散或挖掘。也就意味着，事实上你若看不懂图画中的某些文字，其实没关系，照抄就好。
第二段，阐明观点。观点在题干中往往会给得很清楚，这就说明仔细审清题干比看懂图画中的对话更重要。阐明观点之后的思路与一般的四六级提纲型写作一致：可以先举例说明现象、然后再探讨导致现象的原因以及该现象可能导致的影响等。
末段，除了总结观点外，一般还可以提出建议。这段的写法无论是图画、图表还是提纲写作，都差别不大。
图画作文模板：
It seems to me that thecartoon / drawing is sending a message about ____________（图画内容），whichreveals ____________（稍作评价）.In myperspective of view, ____________ （表明个人观点）。 Apparently, ____________（将个人观点和图片内容相结合，得出观点。）For one thing, ____________（从社会角度论证）. Foranother thing, ____________（从个人角度说明）. For example, ____________（自己、朋友或他人，只要自己知道或听过的例子）.Last but not least, ____________（从反面角度谈论）. As aresult, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _____________（建议或措施）.Onlyin this way can we ____________（展望结果）. In conclusion / To my understanding,____________（再次表明观点或态度）. We should ____________（进一步说明个人的观点）.
范文：以2013年6月 英语四级作文为例
Which Is More Important
As can be seen from the picture above,there is a conversation between a son and a father. The father told his sonthat it is more important to empty the dustbin than to worry about disposing of nuclear waste, that is to say, small things go first when dealing with bigthings. I’m definitely on the father’s side in this and I’m sure I’m notalone.
A case in point is the successful launch of ShenZhou 10 spacecraft, which excites everyone and makes every feel proud ofChina. Behind this great event there are a host of detailed things, called petty things, conducted by millions of scientists, who have devoted themselvesto the mission. It is the petty things that contribute to the success, which reminds us of the significance of small things. We also take ourselves for example. It is acknowledged that before running we must learn to stand and walk building up a solid foundation for running. Although walking is considered as a trifle while running is treated as a great thing, walking is the first step.
As an old saying goes, one can’t make a bigsuccess without bing self reliant. So we should keep it in our mind that before accomplishing important tasks, perform small tasks. Only in this way can we make the highest eminence.
As what is vividly shown in the picture,many college students have the same doubt as the one in the picture that is whether that stuff will be outdated when they graduated and began to work. That stuff, as we can see from the picture, refers to the basic learning skills such as mathematics we learned when we were in primary school. It also reveals a phenomenon in the college that there are a great number of students, who question the practicability of their subjects because they are too simple to behelpful with their occupation afterwards.
Does that mean these subjects are useless? Definitely not. These subjects are like the foundation of a building. Thoughthey are commonplace even invisible, they are of vital importance. Mastering these basic skills we can grasp the fundamental elements of learning ability.As an old saying goes like this, high buildings rise from the ground. Only if we lay a solid foundation, we can’t set up a high building.
In another word, do you think it is feasible to let a person learn English without learning a, b, c? Or with whatwas said above, we can draw a conclusion that the basic learning skills are quite essential to both our whole study and the work we will take after graduation. Thus we should pay more attention to the basic subjects and master the ability required at the further career.
The Importance of Reading Literature
Literature is acknowledged as the most precious product of human civilization and wisdom, especially by our teachers.So they always ask their students to read as many as literary works. Just as the drawing shown above, a teacher gives a literary work to her student,saying: “Just think of it as if you’re reading a long text-message.”
It is of great significance for us toappreciate literature due to the following reasons. Firstly, a good literature can get you to know a life experience through the eyes of someone other than yourself. The more experience you gain, the more knowledgeable you are.Secondly, a good literature allows you to learn about history in a personalized way. The stories told in the works can act as mirrors and help you adjust your own behaviors. Lastly, a good literature is an effective way for relaxation.The beautiful and moving scenes shown in the literature are helpful for one’smental health.
In short, literature is indispensable in our life. We, students, should catch our time to read more literatures.
图表作文的定义:
图标阐释类作文就是要求考生描述图表或图画中的数据或画面，解释这些数据或画面所反映出的变化、现象或者问题，并对其产生的原因、影响或存在的问题进行分析说明。
图表作文的写作思路：
第一段概述图表。用描述性的语言写出图标内容，主要应该是描写趋势，描写这种发展变化，而不是简单的引用数据。先写主题句：As is shown in the 图表， I see/find....或As can be seen from 图表，...或As has been proved form 图表，...
第二段分析原因。要先写出主题句，引出下文对原因的说明：The following reasons can account for 现象。那么后面的扩展句就开始陈述数据变化的原因，但要记住的是这个原因不能只写一点，这样就没有说服力，至少要写出来两点。
第三段对这个数据变化产生的影响和结果进行说明。一样先写主题句，总结作者自身的思考或看法：From my point of view/As for me，...然后在接下来的扩展句当中就你的思考看法进行展开。这里要注意的是对结果方向的把握：⑴如结果是好的：预测未来，展望未来。⑵如结果是坏的：建议措施，解决方案。⑶如结果是中立的：仅发表个人观点或个人见解。最后写出结尾句。
图表作文模板：
According to the chart / graph， the changesin the number of____________（图表整体趋势）. There was an increase in ____________（图表细节）. At the point of ____________, ____________reaches its peak value of ____________(数据或变化). Whathas caused these changes? There are mainly three reasons. Firstly, ____________（原因一）.Secondly, ____________（原因二）. The number of____________ increased over the period. ____________ rose by _________ from________ to ________________. And there were____________. Finally, ____________（最后一个原因）. In conclusion / We can safely draw the conclusion that ____________（结论）. Therefore, ____________（进一步谈论更多个人想法）.
范文：电影让位给电视（图表分析）
Film is giving way to TV
The latest statistics show that the numberof people attending cinemas is getting steadily smaller. At the same time, thenumber of television viewers is growing at almost the same rate. Experts say that these two trends are connected in three ways. First, over the past few decades television sets have appeared in almost every home. Second, films very quickly become available on video, and can be shown on the TV screen. Third, it is becoming more expensive to make films, and so the prices of cinema seats are rising.
However, this does not mean the death ofthe movie industry. There will always be people who prefer to go out to see afilm. This is because no matter how good a TV film or video is, it can never beas entertaining as a film shown on the “big screen.”
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Film is giving way to TV. According to an investigation made on the number of film-goers and TV-watchers in a ten-year period (1975-1985), at the end of 1985, the number of film-goers declined sharply to about 15 thousand which accounts for only some 20 percent of what in1975, the hey day of films. This decline, no doubt, owes to the steadily increasing number of TV-watchers in the same decade.
This, I think, indicates the changing pace in our society. Nowadays, people prefer TV to film largely because they have less chance than their older generation to spend two or three hours in a cinema; they prefer a kind of entertainment which is freer, less time-consuming and thus more efficient. TV just meets their need. This is at least partly if not wholly the reason that attributes to the boom of TV in our generation.
Nevertheless, there are still a number of film-fans nowadays. They claim that as a classical art, film is far more enjoyable than TV. Some of them also want to recall the “true-life” which existed in the “good-past”. All in all, film is still a charming kind of art asit used to be.
On over-fishing
As is shown in the graph/chart/picture/cartoon, we can see clearly that with the rampancy of commercial fishing, the number of fishes sharply /dramatically /considerably decreased.In one picture,there werevarious kinds of fish and only one fishing boat in 1900,On the contrary,in 1995 there was only one fish,but many fishing-boats. The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another.(这些数据似乎是孤立存在的，但是却密切相关．)
The purpose of this picture is to show us that much more/due attention has to bepaid to the decrease/decline/reduction/of ocean resources. Owing to/ as theconsequence of/as the result of(由于) over-fishing, the number of fishes has obviously decreased. If we let this situation go as it is, we won’t know where fish will be in the future.By that time, our environment will have suffered a great destruction.
Therefore,it is imperative(迫切的)for us to take drastic measures to reverse the disturbing(adj.令人不安的) trend illustrated in the charts. For one thing/on the one hand, we should appeal to our authorities to work out strict laws to control commercial fishing. For another/on the other hand, we should cultivate/enhance the awareness of people that the ocean/forest resources are very vital to us. Only in this way can we protect our natural environment/ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty and we will have a brilliant future.
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