2012届全国名校英语模拟试题汇编之短文改错（14份）
【2012届·宁夏银川一中高三第四次月考】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
【答案】
V．短文改错
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then (改when)I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加am )at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder.. The familiar patterns of notes attracts(改attract) me into the colourfully（改(colourful或colorful) world of music. Now and then I stopped(改 stop) to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to (改on)my homework. She does not like th
e (去the)pop
music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their (改her)beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which(改that) people of different age (改ages)understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
【2012届·兰州一中12月月考】
短文改错（共15小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）; 如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I am very thankful you for inviting me to go 76．_____________
and stay with you in Nanjing．I often heard that 77．____________
Nanjing is a beautiful city and that I have been 78．____________
longing to see you again so that I can get more help 79．____________
from you in my English study．And I am afraid 80．____________
I can’t come this coming summer vacations．My 81．____________
grandmother, who lives in the country, asked me 82．____________
again and again to go and spending the vacation 83．____________
together with him．She misses me so much that I 84．____________
have no choice but obey her．I wish I could go 85．____________
and see you at the end of this year．
【答案】
76．you前加to 77．heard---hear 78．去掉that 79．正确
80．And---But 81．vacations---vacation 82．asked前加has
83．spending---spend 84．him---her 85．but后加to
【2012届·广西老牌高中联考】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Linda,
How are things going? I can’t wait to tell you the good news what 76．
my parents have just allowed me to take a 10-day trip to England this 77．
winter. That would be a really good chance for me to experience English 78．
culture. What’s more. I can im
prove my speaking English. I have learned 79．
English for many years, so I have few chances to practice English. I don’t 80．
like to join in a group to travel. Could you offer me some advice on where 81．
to stay, what to eat and how to travel in such short time? I’d appreciate it 82．
if you can provide me with some necessary informations. I’m sure your 83．
suggestions will surely make my visit enjoyably. 84．
I’m looking forward to hear from you soon. 85．
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
【2012届·山西省临汾一中高三第二次月考】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw a great diversity of robot. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people, included playing chess, playing the piano and drawing pictures. What’s more, the robots were in different kinds and shapes, which made us enjoyable. In addition, that excited me most is the show given by a group of robots. They danced just as if they were dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot of about robots , especial about their functions and shapes. The great human wisdom is so powerful that it make us feel more comfortable live in the world.
【答案】
1．which改为where 2.robot改为robots 3.amazed改为amazing
4.included改为including 5. that改为what 6. is改为was
7.of去掉 8. especial改为especially 9. make改为makes 10.live前加to
【2012届·重庆一中高三上学期期中考试】
短文改错。（每小题1分，共10分）
Suzy and her mother were in their summer vacation. They enjoyed
76.
a wonderfully day at the beach and stayed longer than they
77.
have expected. They were driving home very late at night
78.
while a heavy storm broke out. Suzy’s mother could hardly see
79.
to drive. Then suddenly they saw the house with a sign said
80.
“Welc
ome Inn”. Suzy’s mother thought would be a good idea
81.
to stop for the night or go home in the morning. They parked
82.
in the front of the door, hurried up the stairs that led to front
83.
door, and knocked. The owner warmly welcame them, and
84.
Suzy and her mother all felt happy.
85.
【答案】
短文改错：10分
76. in—on 77. wonderfully—wonderful 78. have—had 79.while—when
80. said—saying 81. would前加it 82. or—and 83. 第一个the去掉
84. welcome—welcomed 85. all—both
【 2012届·四川省树德协进中学高三上学期期中】
短文改错(共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分)
It was snowing heavy on Monday morning. Li Hua was 66._________
at the bus stop, waiting for Bus No. 601 to go to school. After a 67._________
while, a bus came and she got on it. Here were many passengers 68._________
in the bus. Some were talking and some were looking out for the 69._________
windows. All of sudden the bus stopped. The driver turned 70._________
around and said, “Sorry. The bus had broken down. Please 71._________
get off and help push the bus.” When she heard it, Li Hua 72._________
and the others passengers got off the bus. They worked hard 73._________
together, pushed the bus slowly forward. Soon the bus was running 74._________
again. All the passengers were smiling and so the sun was shining. 75._________
【答案】
短文改错: 76. heavy→heavily 77. 正确 78. Here→there 79. for→of
80. of 后加a 81. had→has 82. she→they 83. others→other 84. pushed→pushing 85. 去掉so
【2012届·广西南宁二中等三校高三11月联考】
短文改错（共10小题，计10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每～行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写山该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。）
I think it is time that we do something to help 76．_________
animals．Firstly, the fur farms should be close． 77．________
Animals should not be kept in small places, and 78．______
treated cruel．They should be given the right to 79． _________
live in the wild where they are belong．Secondly, 80．______
the general public should not sel! fur coats．If there 81．_________
is no longer a demand at the coats, factories will 82．_________
stop making it．This would save the lives of many 83．_________
animals, some of that have almost died out as a 84．_________
result of what we have done them．Please give them a chance． 85．_________
【答案】
【2012届·高三第
一学期浙南、浙北部分学校12月联考】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around
8 p.m. in Friday evening.
on
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found
a g
irl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my
best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked
after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother
came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with
each other, the world will become more beautiful.
【答案】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
66. there was 改成there are
67. cry改成crying， find sb. doing sth.意思是“看见某人正在做某事”
68. can’t改为couldn’t. 短文上下文都是一般过去时
69. try改
为tried
70. find前加 to。try one’s best to do sth.
71. on the same time改成at the same time.
72. careful改成carefully，副词修饰动词looked after.
73. his mother 改成her mother.
74. happily改成happy,是系表结构。
75. with划掉。help each other意思是“互相帮助”
【2012届·山东省济宁市重点中学高三上学期期中】
短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错误的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot, but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing so
und from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．
【答案】
短文改错
76．a 改为the 77．sudden改为suddenly 78．but改为and
79．out后加of 80．it改为them 81．drop改为drops
82．come改为came 83．more改为much或去掉 84．that改为what
85．broke改为broken
【2012届·浙江省宁波市高三“十校联考”考试】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the traffic court of a large mid-western city, a young lady is brought before the judge to
answer a ticket given her for drive through a red light. He explained that she was school teacher
and requested an immediately disposal of her case in order that she might hurried to her classes.
A wild idea came upon to the judge’s mind. “You are a school teacher, eh?” said he. “Madam, I
shall realize me life-long ambition. Sit down on that table and write ‘I went through a red light’
five hundred time.”
【答案】：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
In the traffic court of a large mid-western city, a young lady is brought before the judge to
was
answer a ticket given her for drive through a red light. He explained that she was∧school teacher
driving She a
and requested an immediately disposal of her case in order that she might hurried to her classes.
immediate hurry
A wild idea came upon to the judge’s mind. “You are a school teacher, eh?” said he. “Madam, I
shall realize me life-long ambition. Sit down on that table and write ‘I went through a red light’
my at
five hundred time.”
times
【英语卷·2012届河南许昌市高三上学期四校联考】
短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
This morning I got up early and went to school as usually, only to find there were nobody in the classroom because it is Sunday. “How a bad memory I have!” I couldn’t help laughing. Stand in front of the school gate, I began to wonder what to do next. Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. “Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather?” I immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but they all agreed to join me. About two hours late, we finally arrived a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there. We really enjoyed us greatly.
【答案】
1.usually- usual 2. were- was 3. how- what 4. stand-standing
5. occurs-occurred 6.such a 7. but-and 8. late- later
9. arrived∧at 10. us-ourselves
【2012届·牡丹江一中高三上学期期中考试】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom,
a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he
would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.
【答案】
改错
第一行 flowers 改为 flower; 去掉been
第二行 visiting 改为 visit
第三行 clear 改为 clearly
第五行 for 改为 to; owing 改为 owed; kind 改为 kindness; With 改为 Without
第七行 result 与the之间加of; has 改为 had
【2012届·甘肃省天水一中高三第三阶段考试】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分；满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一题做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划对号：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原文没有错误不要改。
To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive topic. 61．_______
Not one can live without money in modern society. People 62．_______
has dif
ferent opinions on it. Some people think one should 63．_______
live to make money, when others make money to live. 64．_______
In my opinion, the latter should reasonable. 65．_______
We should not be the slave of money. Although money 66．_______
means a lot in our life, but it does not mean everything . 67．_______
We can’t exchange it for friendship or love. Money indeed could 68．_______
make a person enjoying his life
for a while but not all his life. 69．_______
On a word, money is something but not everything. 70．_______
【答案】
61, was改为is 62．Not改为No 63．has改为have 64．when改为while
65．should后加be 66．slave后加s 67．but去掉 68.√
69.enjoying改为enjoy 70．On改为In
【2012届·新疆乌鲁木齐八中高三第三次月考】 改错(10分)
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds the view what Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons.It seems to her that if I am allowed to do that,I ‘ll be unable to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks it was bad for my eyes. But I really can’t accept his ideas.In my opinion,watch TV can relax ourselves after a day’s hard works.Beside,it is important for us to know what has happened at home and at abroad.Thus,we shouldn’t forbidden to watch TV.
