英文写作训练1改写

我们自己在写文章的时候总觉得不知道用什么词语来表达，怎么构建文章的结构。所以写出来的文章显得比较粗糙，你可以运用你的英语能力来润色它。下面这两篇文章比较粗糙，我们来学习怎么润色一下。

1）Some people are old. They do not have knowledge. Is he more intelligible than young people? We cannot judge it by age. There is a famous philosopher in China. He said like this. Someone is your teacher with three people. Nobody knows all. You are an expert here, but you are not there. Anyone can be a teacher. Because he knows something better.

润色后的文章：

Being old does not always mean having more knowledge. We cannot decide whether a person is more intelligible merely by judging his age. The Chinese famous philosopher Confucius said that you might find someone to be your teacher when walking with a group of people. No one can claim to know all. He may be an expert in one thing but ignorant of another. So anyone who knows something better than other people do can be their teacher.

2）science is developing Technology, too. Today, people live better, much better. They have enough food to eat. They have enough clothes to warm. They have enough houses to live. They are not afraid of cold. They are not afraid of hunger. They are not afraid of danger. Even natural disasters come, they do not die.

润色后的文章：

With the development of science and technology, people's living conditions have improved considerably. They have food enough to keep alive, clothes warm enough to protect themselves from cold, and houses strong enough to shelter themselves from danger. Hunger, cold, and danger no longer threaten human beings constantly. In face of natural disasters, people now can use all available means to survive and minimize deaths.

经过一番修饰是不是好看了许多呢。多做这样的练习你的文章也会写得越来越好，希望你有所进步哟！