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英语四级写作计划第二周第4天(5):如何写提出观点段和总结观点段每日佳作赏析

四、每日佳作赏析

Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic To Become a Specialist or a Generallst ? You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
1.有人认为一个学生应该努力成为一个“专才”。
2.然而其他人则认为学生应该为“通才”才能在现代社会立足。
3.你的看法是……

范文

(①) When it comes to whether a student should become a specialist or a generalist , (1②) there is no complete agreement among people . (2①) Some people think that it is best for college students to (3) focus on developing skills in one field to become a specialist . (2②) However , others maintain that a versatile generalist (4①) is more welcomed in the competitive job market .

(5) Those people who hold the former opinion believe that it is impossible to demand college sudents to become an all-round generalist within four years . (6①)In addition , (7) with increasing elaboration of social division , the specialists (8) are in more urgent need . (9) However , still others advocate the different opinion . They hold that college students should stretch themselves to (10) as many fields as possible to adapt to (11) the increasingly fierce competition . (6②) Besides , generalists (4②) are highly demanded in the information age .

(12) Personally , I am in favor of the former opinion . (13) I don't think it is advisable that college students equally spend their time and energy on several fields . (6③) Besides , the development of high-tech needs spedialists . Therefore , I think to be a specialist is the right choice for most students .

点评
(1)引出有争议的话题的常用句式,when it comes to…意为“当谈到或提及……”。
(2)提出对立观点的常用句式。
(3)意为“注重,集中”。
(4)被动语态使用恰到好处。
(5)用于引出第一种观点的理由。
(6)衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
(7)意为“随着社会分工越来越细”。
(8)意为“更加急需”。
(9)用于引出对相反观点的论证。
(10)as…as表示同级比较,意为“尽可能多的领域”。
(11)意为“越来越激烈的竟争”。
(12)用于引出个人观点。
(13)注意是否转移。


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