我的“太极思维”写作法[初稿]-以南通一模作文为例

前言：

 长期以来，我看过很多关于写作思维拓展方面的书，基本都是列举从通用话题，但是这里面导致：话题不够用，无法想。我认为高级写作着重：

（1）如何将一个内容简单的简单句扩展成有血有肉的简单句或复合句；

（2）如何打通句子与句子之间的逻辑关系

虽然我经过很多尝试，也取得了一些成就，但总是有点遗憾。于是有一天，我看到了太极阴阳图，我恍然大悟。世间万物莫不是正反相克或相辅相成，每个相克之物都有自己的内在联系。请注意：正反不一定是敌我双方，也可能是兄弟、夫妻类关系。简而言之就是：

太极思维的通俗化解释

提出一个靠谱的论点，确定从正、反两面的论证

分论点要尽量的简单，从四个方向（因果、正负等）去拓展句子的形式

句子的内容要从八个话题方面去充实

具体内容如下：

第一步：

太极分两仪（文章要点的两分法）：

正--反

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第二步：两仪生四象（文章展开的分论点的展开手段）：

原因--结果

论点--论据

定义--举例

正极[多/好/快]--负极[少/坏/慢]

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第三步：四象生八卦（分论点展开的思维两级方向）：

环境--健康

权利--责任

金钱--享受

社交--竞争

效率--科技

学习--品性

就业--压力

时间--传统

直播视频：

 

如何去概括

概括的时候切记：

（1）段落大意重在首句的改写；

（2）末段要注意作者的观点；

（3）例子统统不要。

大意1：People long to become what seems to be impossible in reality.

大意2：People are  dissatisfied with themselves.

大意3： A perfect life where unrealistic dreams are easy to realize cannot exist but appeals to them.

--》合并：

People who tend to be dissatisfied with themselves long to become what seems impossible in reality. A perfect life, though appealing, cannot exist where unrealistic dreams are easy to realize. 

 

太极分“两仪”——正、反

第一步：论点

Setting a realistic goal contributes a lot to our success as well as physical and mental health.

这个论点可以从以下两方考虑：

“两仪”——正、反

Positive:What good will a realistic goal bring to us?

Negative:What harm will an unrealistic goal bring to us?

 

“两仪”分四象---正向如何写

第一层：“四象”——定义 例子   “八卦”——品性

解释：这一层，我先要对reallisticgoal定义以下，这也是英语思维的最重要的特征，然后举例论证，例子反映个人的品性。

请记住：

定义的通常公式是：N., 同位语 定语从句

(1)A realistic goal is where one willingly accepts the reality and pursues hisdream regardless of difficulty in the way.

(2)It can benefit him in many ways.

(3) It can nourish his confidence and gain him deep insight into life.

合并：

A realistic goal, one where one willingly accepts the reality and pursues his dream regardless of difficulty in the way, can benefit him in many ways such as nourishing/cultivating/developing his confidence and gaining him deepinsight into life.

第二层：“四象”——正极；因 果  “八卦”——压力；时间

解释：这一层，我要对定义进行展开来说明。realisticgoal为什么需要它？结果会如何？然后我从压力和时间来阐述。

正极 结果（时间）

Accompanying a realistic goal is great value on time, which undoubtedly facilitates the pursuit of the dream.

正极 原因（压力）

It can also be an outlet for pressure instead of an annoyance, because people willsee the bright side of what happens.

 

“两仪”分四象---负向如何写

原因 负极：

Disatisfation from failure to achieve the goal easily leads to complaints about life.

原因 负极 结果1：

Lost in fantasy, the pessimistic are deliberately hiding away from reality, taking it for granted that they can achieve any goals without making efforts.

享受 结果：

They give top priority to individual enjoyment which in turn makes them withdraw from society.

 结果2：

Also, it deprives them of the opportunity to sap the beauty of real life and multiplies the risk of despairing.