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2019高考满分作文解析

【试题回顾】

假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展.请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:

1.写信目的;

2.个人优势;

3.能做的事情.

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.结束语已为你写好.

【分析】高分句型

1Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintingsI am  writing to apply for volunteering

句子里,现在分词Knowing 和宾语从句that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings做原因状语.

我知道当地美术馆将举办一个中国画展览,所以写信申请志愿服务.

2As a  student  who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners

句子里,修饰先行词 a  student ,关系词 who引导定语从句 has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old

作为一名5岁就开始学习中国画的学生,我很高兴有机会向外国人介绍中国画.

【解答】Dear sir or madam

I am a Chinese student named Li Huawho is  studying in London during the summer vacationKnowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintingsI am  writing to apply for volunteering. 【高分句型一】(写信目的)

As a  student  who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners. 【高分句型二】Besidesmy fluent spoken English  and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings  will help visitors  understand the meaning behind each painting deeply.(个人优势以及能做的事情)

 I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunityLooking forward to your early reply.(期盼回复)

Yours

LiHua

【点评】本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

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日期:2019/6/11 7:36:02;用户:吕伟;邮箱:17771354632;学号:23256181

2019全国II卷高考英语作文

【试题回顾】

假定你是校排球队队长李华.请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:

1.比赛信息;

2.赛前准备;

3.表达期待.

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.

【分析】高分句型一:I am writing to tell you a piece of news that a volleyball game will be held on the playground this Friday afternoon

译文:我写信是想告诉你一个消息,今天下午排球比赛将在操场上举行.

分析:这句话使用that引导同位语从句.

高分句型二:Only when we improve our skills and build up our strength can we ensure the victory

译文:只有档我们提高技能,增强实力,才能保证胜利.

分析:倒装句.

【解答】Dear Chris

I am writing to tell you a piece of news that a volleyball game will be held on the playground this Friday afternoon. 【高分句型一】Our team will play against Class 2 teamwhich means it will be a close game. (比赛信息) We should make good preparations for it so that we can win the gameAs a resultit is necessary for us to practice playing it every afternoon after schoolOnly when we improve our skills and build up our strength can we ensure the victory.【高分句型二】(赛前准备)

Hopefullywe can win the game.(表达愿望)

Yours

Li Hua

【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

声明:试题解析著作权属菁优网所有,未经书面同意,不得复制发布

2019全国III卷高考英语作文

【试题回顾】

假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节.请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:

1.时间;

2.活动安排;

3.欢迎他表演节目.

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.

【分析】高分句型一:In the music festivalwe invite some famous singers and pianist to performwho will also give some lessons to the students

译文:在音乐节上,我们邀请了一些著名的歌手和钢琴家表演,他们也会给学生上一些课.

分析:who引导定语从句.

高分句型二: If possibleyou are welcome to perform in the festivalwhich will be a great experience

译文:如果可能的话,欢迎您在节日里表演,这将是一次很好的体验.

分析:if引导省略的时间状语从句,which引导定语从句.

【解答】Dear Allen

I am writing to tell you that a music festival will be held in our schoolWe can take part in the music  festival in the school hall next Friday afternoon.(时间 ) In the music festivalwe invite some famous singers and pianist to performwho will also give some lessons to the students. 【高分句型一】In additionsome students can have a chance to cooperate with this musicians. (活动安排)As a music fanyou are bound to participate in the festivalIf possibleyou are welcome to perform in the festivalwhich will be a great experience.【高分句型二】 (欢迎他表演节目)Hopefullyyou can take part in it and don't miss the chanceYoursLi Hua

【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

江苏2019高考英语作文

【试题回顾】

请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章.

    Li JiangHave you heard thisA group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month

    Su HuaYesI haveSome are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony

    Li JiangBut it seems people have different opinions

    Su HuaWhat do you think

    Li JiangI think it's a good ideaIt's an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students

    Su HuaI agreeBut we don't have to dress that wayThat's not our daily styleBesidesit's not very convenient

    Li JiangYou seeit's the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming forJust the right occasion

    Su HuaI prefer the school uniformIt's niceIt's also a better display of our school culture

【写作内容】

1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容;

2.在上述场合,你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装?请说明理由(不少于两点).

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.不必写标题.

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当.

【分析】高分句型一:The main question presented in the dialogue is whether the students should wear traditional costumes during a ceremony for foreign students

译文:对话中提出的主要问题是,在外国学生的仪式上,学生是否应该穿传统服装.

分析:过去分词做定语,whether引导表语从句.

高分句型二: They are highly representative of our traditionsand will undoubtedly leave a deep impression on the foreign students who are coming for a 'cultural' exchange

译文:他们高度代表了我们的传统,无疑会给前来参加"文化"交流的外国学生留下深刻印象.

分析:who引导定语从句.

【解答】The main question presented in the dialogue is whether the students should wear traditional costumes during a ceremony for foreign students. 【高分句型一】The students had each given their own stand and reasons.( 概述)

I am more inclined to agree with Li Jiangtaking into consideration of the following perspectivesFirsttraditional costumes are one of the most suitable items when it comes to presenting our culture.  They are highly representative of our traditionsand will undoubtedly leave a deep impression on the foreign students who are coming for a 'cultural' exchange.【高分句型二】 Secondattending the event in traditional Chinese dress may open up several opportunities for interactionThe organizer can come up with several activities based on the attire itselfsuch as inviting the foreign students to try our traditional costumes. (你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装?请说明理由)

To concludemy advice is that the students should wear traditional Chinese dress for this occasion.(结论)

【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

天津市2019高考英语作文

【试题回顾】

假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动.活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座.现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见.请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);

2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;

3)希望从中有何收获.

注意:

1)词数不少于100

2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.

Dear Chris

I'm Li Jina student at Chenguang High School

Thank you for your time

Yours

Li Jin

【分析】高分句型一:I am interested in all kinds of musicamong which Jazz is my favorite

译文:我对各种音乐都感兴趣,其中爵士乐是我最喜欢的.

分析:among which引导非限制性定语从句.

高分句型二:I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz

译文:如果你能增加一些享受爵士乐的课程,我会很感激的.

分析:固定句型appreciate it if

【解答】Dear Chris

I'm Li Jina student at Chenguang High SchoolI got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a weeklong summer exchangeDuring the activityyou will give a lecture on Western artYou want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about.(写信目的)

From my personal notemusic is my priority. (你喜欢的讲座话题)I am interested in all kinds of musicamong which Jazz is my favorite. 【高分句型一】I want to know about the history of jazzand some famous jazz singers.(选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容)

I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz. 【高分句型二】(希望从中有何收获)

Thank you for your time

Yours

Li Jin

【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

声明:试题解析著作权属菁优网所有,未经书面同意,不得复制发布

北京市2019高考英语作文

【试题回顾】

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华.你们班上周组织了一次以"劳动最光荣"为主题的社会实践活动.请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个过程.

注意:词数不少于60

提示词:西瓜 watermelon

 

【分析】高分句型一:When I got homeI packed up my luggage for the trip

译文:当我到家的时候,我为这次旅行收拾行李.

分析:when引导时间状语从句.

高分句型二:While workingI realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun

译文:当工作的时候,我意识到在炎热的太阳下面在田里劳作是多么难.

分析:使用while引导省略的时间状语从句,realized后面是how引导宾语从句.

【解答】Last week I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs.(引出话题)

At the class meetingour teacher told us about the programme with the theme "Working is most beautiful"And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.(图一)When I got homeI packed up my luggage for the trip.【高分句型一】(图二)On the farmwe helped pick watermelonsWhile workingI realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.【高分句型二】(图三)When I came back homeI shared my experiences with my parentsAnd they were very proud of me.(图四)

【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

浙江省2019高考英语作文

【试题回顾】

假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家.请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:

1.表示感谢;

2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;

3.临别祝愿.

注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.

【分析】高分句型一:It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture

译文:是你和我分享了丰富的英语和英语文化知识.

分析:使用强调句.

高分句型二:Never will I forget you and your kindness

译文:我永远不会忘记你和你的善良.

分析:使用倒装句.

【解答】Dear Chris

I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before longWe get along well during your stay in China and you offered me  lots of helpI would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English.(表示感谢)

While studying in Chinayou always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral EnglishIt is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture. 【高分句型一】Never will I forget you and your kindness.【高分句型二】(回顾Alex对你的帮助)

It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.(表达愿望)

Yours

Li Hua

【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

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