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(2) A Beautiful place
Moon Lake Packpark )is a beautiful place in NingBo. that (改成it)is near my school.
In spring, the flowers are opening(开花用blossom.The flowers are in blossom,没学过blossom的时候,可以用另一个学过的句型表达,如:There are many flowers in the park. They are beautiful或者:The garden will look very beautiful when all the plants are in flower.), the leaves are green, the lack(lake) is clean. A lot of birds are singing on the branch. Look, there are some boats in the lake.
In summer, (the)sun is hot .so many people do morning exercise in the morning. Someone are sleeping under the trees.
(in)Fall, the park is very fragrant. Because the sweet scented osmanthus are opening mow, fruits are ripeness.
Winter is so beautiful. The lake is grey and sliver .The park is quiet.
Moon lake Pack(park) is a very beautiful place. I like it.

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