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考研英语作文跑题,还有分吗?
从刚考完英语到现在,一直有同学问:“这么写行吗?那么写行吗?如果偏题或跑题了,作文还有分吗?”

首先,我想告诉你:阅卷时,一般老师不会轻易打零分,因为很难有人能把作文写的一点都不切题。

这么说绝不是为了安慰大家,而是客观事实如此。所以,担心得零分的同学,大可不必(照抄阅读或全文用汉语拼音写作文除外)。只要和题干内容沾边,就不算跑题,就一定有分。

还有同学担心小作文漏掉了落款或写错了称谓,问会扣几分?答案是最多影响1分。

Part A

51. Directions:

Write an email to a professor at a British university, inviting him/her to organize a team for the international innovation contest to be held at your university. You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not use your own name in the e-mail; use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)

【简析】本次考研小作文考察邀请信,与2013年英语(一)的小作文类似。题目要求考生写一封邮件,邀请英国某大学的教授组队参加一项将于你所在大学举办的国际创新大赛。按照题目要求,必须写到邀请,其他内容只要相关即可。

【范文】

Dear Professor Sky, 

     As the chairman of the Student Union in Peking University where the international innovation contest will be held, I am writing for the purpose of inviting you to organize a team for the contest.

    Innovation can be likened to a journey, leading human society to keep moving forward. As we all know, you, compared with others, possess richer experience in developing innovative products and theoretical research. Thus, we sincerely hope that you can organize a team and participate in the contest. Your participation will definitely bring every one new horizons, arouse youngsters' passion for innovation and help the contest be successful.

   The contest is scheduled to start January 1 in Students' Center of Peking University and last for 3 days. We are looking forward to your favorable reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 【范文】  

亲爱的思凯教授:

     作为国际创新大赛举办地北京大学学生会的主席,我写这封信的目的是邀请你组队参加本次大赛。

     创新可以被比喻成引领人类社会不断前进的道路。众所周知,与其他人相比,您在开发创新产品和理论研究方面拥有更丰富的经验。因此,我们真诚地希望您能组队参加比赛。您的参与一定会给大家带来新的视野,激发年轻人的创新热情,帮助比赛取得成功。

   比赛定于1月1日在北京大学学生中心开始,为期3天。我们期待着您的回复。

   您诚挚的

李明

Part B

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the pictures below. In your essay, you should

1) describe the pictures briefly,

2) interpret the implied meaning, and

3) give your comments.

Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

【简析】

本次图画作文延续近几年的出题风格,涉及到两个人对待同一事物的态度差别。

本文只要涉及学习知识,就不算跑题,考生可以从积极/消极的学习态度、广泛汲取知识的重要性、专注学好本专业、建议听各种讲座、保持好奇心、勤于学习、学习知识提升综合素质、保持学习的自律、关于学习的选择等切入,均不算跑题。

【范文】

Such a cartoon, apparently, can be associated with two distinct attitudes towards learning. Why? Let us closely observe it. Beside a bulletin board, there is a girl, pointing at the board and commenting: "This lecture is not concerning our major and it is worthless to listen to it. " However, the other girl, with short hair and a hat, says: "It is definitely good to learn something!"

Successful figures, to my understanding, are characterized by their various merits, such as diligence, optimism, curiosity and positive attitude to learning. Nonetheless, in reality, a host of youngsters are reluctant to acquire knowledge or skills beyond their majors. As a matter of fact, this shortsighted behavior has constituted an obstacle that hinders young people's growth and progress in personal development. As a college student, I deem that it is of great necessity for us to gain various experience and competence, which may bring us power, arouse our passion for life and help us broaden our horizons.

Accordingly, the society as a whole should foster a positive atmosphere to educate and encourage teenagers to read diverse books and attend sorts of lectures if time and energy is available. Everyone should bear in mind that knowledge is power, treasure and the journey to a promising future.

【译文】

显然,这样一幅漫画能让我们想到两种截然不同的学习态度。为什么?让我们仔细观察一下图片。在一个布告栏旁,有一个女孩指着布告栏说:“这讲座与我们的专业无关,听也没用。”然而,另一个留着短发、戴着帽子的女孩说:“学点东西肯定很好呀!”

在我看来,成功人士突出特征就在于他们的各种优点,如勤奋、乐观、好奇和积极的学习态度。然而,在现实中,许多年轻人不愿意获得专业以外的知识或技能。事实上,这种短视的行为已经成为阻碍年轻人成长和个人发展进步的障碍。作为一名大学生,我认为获得各种经验和能力是非常必要的,这些经验和能力可以给我们带来力量,激发我们对生活的热情,帮助我们开阔视野。

因此,整个社会应该营造一种积极的氛围,教育和鼓励青少年在时间和精力允许的情况下阅读各种书籍和听各种讲座。每个人都应该记住,知识是力量、是财富、是通往光明未来的道路。

英语二:

Part A

47. Directions:

Suppose you are planning a campus food festival. Write an email to the international students in your university to

1) introduce the food festival, and

2) invite them to participate

You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not use your own name. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write your address. (10 points)

【简析】题目所给背景为:假设你正在策划一次校园美食节。要求写邮件给留学生,介绍该活动并邀请他们参加。只要写到上述内容且语言表述正确,必然高分。

【范文】

Dear Sir/Madam,

   As the chairman of the Student Union in this university who is in charge of planning the campus food festival, I am writing to introduce relevant details and invite you to participate.

  The festival is scheduled to start at 10:00 on January 1 in the Center of Students' Activities and last for approximately 4 hours. If you are good at cooking, we sincerely invite you to show your cooking skills; if you are keen on tasty food,  it is advisabel for you to come and taste. This festival, I deem, will bring you opportunities to enjoy both western and Chinese foods, arouse your passion for food culture and help you make new friends.

   I, on behalf of the Student Union, am looking forward to your participation.

Your sincerely,

Li Ming

尊敬的先生/女士:

   作为负责策划校园美食节的我校学生会主席,我写信向大家介绍相关细节并邀请大家参加。

   美食节定于1月1日10:00在学生活动中心开始,持续约4小时。如果您擅长烹饪,我们真诚邀请您展示您的烹饪才艺;如果你喜欢美食,你来品尝也是明智之举。我相信,本次美食节将给你带来享受中西美食的机会,激发你对饮食文化的热情,帮助你结交新朋友。

   我代表学生会期待你们的参与。

您诚挚的,

李明

Part B

48. Directions:

Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

【简析】

本次图表作文考察数据的变化,难点在于很多同学不会写“快递”、“业务量”等汉语表达对应的英文词汇。如果只是主题词不会写,其他部分表述正确,并不会导致低分。

另外,不少同学“十亿”(billion)没写出来,还有同学“元”(yuan)漏写,会略微影响得分(1-2分)。整体语言质量是关键,小错对全局影响一般不大。

【范文】

This is a column chart, which clearly illustrates the striking changes in business volume of express deliveries in China from 2018 to 2020. The total volume ascended remarkably, from 51 billion yuan in 2018 to 83 billion yuan in 2020. Meanwhile, the volume in rural areas showed a sharp increase, from 12 billion yuan to 30 billion yuan.

Such statistics above can be associated with the growing popularity of courier service in China. There are two reasons accounting for this phenomenon. For one thing, China, in recent years, was characterized by the boom and prosperity in economy, which enabled residents, including people in the countryside, to possess additional money to shop. For another, compared with the past years, more customers chose shopping online and thus, an increasing number of items and parcels were delivered to buyers.

As a senior who is preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduates, I am busy with my academic pursuit and so I purchase books, clothes, shoes and comsmetics from the Internet. I deem that the service of SF is the best.

【译文】

这是一个柱状图,清楚地展示了2018年至2020年中国快递业务量的显著变化。快递业总量显著上升,从2018年的510亿元增到2020年的830亿元。与此同时,农村地区的交易量急剧增加,从120亿元增加到300亿元。

上述统计数据能让我们联想到中国快递服务的日益普及。有两个原因可解释这种现象。一方面,近年来,中国的经济繁荣,这使得包括农村居民在内的人们能够拥有更多钱购物。另一方面,与过去几年相比,更多的顾客选择在线购物,因此,越来越多的商品和包裹被快递给买家。

作为一名正在准备研究生入学考试的大四学生,我忙于学业,因此选择从互联网上购买书籍、衣服、鞋子和化妆品。我认为SF的服务是最好的。



同时,说一下,作文如何估分?

将自己写的作文和参考范文进行对比,如果和参考范文差不多,可以打一个80%-60%的得分,如果差很多,建议打50%以下即可。

初试结束了,复试也要开始准备了,如果发现自己没有考前的那股子拼劲和动力,建议读读下面的这本黄色书籍寻找精神力量吧!

一个同学说,自己的舍友看到了她买的这本小黄书,以为是鸡汤,结果打了自己的脸,拿起书竟然一口气读完了。不仅如此,还给闺蜜买了一本当礼物。

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