
Amazing!北京时间今日凌晨,巴黎奥运会再次传来捷报!

(郑重声明:图片来自郑钦文微博)
年仅21岁的中国网球运动员郑钦文
一举夺得奥运会女单冠军
这是中国网球首枚奥运女单金牌
也是继2004年雅典奥运会
中国组合李婷/孙甜甜女双夺冠后



再来看看CNN的报道,标题稍长一些,凸显了“文女王”强大的气场:
Zheng Qinwen summons inner strength to claim China’s first Olympic singles gold medal with victory against Donna Vekić
郑钦文鼓起内心的力量,战胜唐娜·韦基奇,夺得中国首枚奥运单打金牌
Zheng Qinwen arrived at the Paris Olympics as a top-10 player but an unlikely candidate to win the title. She will leave as China’s first-ever tennis singles champion, the biggest accolade of her young career.
Against Croatia’s Donna Vekić, Zheng produced a stunning display of powerful hitting on the clay of Roland Garros, triumphing 6-2, 6-3 in a hard-fought gold medal match.
Don’t be fooled by the lopsided scoreline – Zheng was made to battle throughout the one-hour, 44-minute contest, saving multiple break points and pouncing on every opportunity she had to get further in front.
Upon winning match point, her delight was laid bare. She dropped to the ground, stretching her arms out wide and caking her back in red clay.
Even Zheng’s idol, two-time grand slam champion Li Na, did not match this feat, never finishing better than fourth at an Olympics.
这一写作逻辑值得学习借鉴,有点类似中文里“先抑后扬”的写作手法。先是描述郑钦文以世界排名前十的选手身份来到巴黎奥运会,但不太可能赢得冠军。紧接着就是添上一句:她将以中国第一位网球单打冠军的身份离开,这是她年轻职业生涯里最大的荣誉。再往下就是比赛场景的具体描写,从比分到赛场表现,再到郑钦文夺冠瞬间的喜悦举动,所有种种无一不在彰显这一金牌沉甸甸的份量以及得来不易。
昕妈还想说的是,这个暑期多多鼓励、引导自家孩子看看奥运赛事吧! 不仅仅是单纯感受比赛夺冠的那种超燃爆棚,更是从冠军身上学会calmness(冷静)、grit(毅力)perseverance(坚持)、devotion(热爱)、self-confidence(自信)、self-restraint(涵养)等优秀品质,而这些恰恰是在补习班上所学不到的。
最后祝愿所有关注昕妈心语的小伙伴们未来都能成为自己的人生大赢家,哪怕遭遇艰难险阻,也能如奥运冠军那般冷静、坦然、从容应对挑战!面对各种质疑责难时,都能有底气做好自己!依然坚持自己的热爱,并始终拥有拳拳爱国的赤子之心!