花了60分钟写完雅思作文，但其实你第一分钟就已经败了。

我知道你不服，不服来战！

你能各用5分钟，完成下面两个题目的提纲写作吗？

1. Some people think that a mother cannot be a good mother and work outside at the same time. Therefore the government should pay those mothers and allow them to look after children at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2. Some people think nowadays children have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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我知道你不会写，那你就想想吧。

提示请往下翻

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1. Some people think that a mother cannot be a good mother and work outside at the same time. Therefore the government should pay those mothers and allow them to look after children at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

提示：不知道你是否回应了第一句话。请注意，如果你只回应后半部分，这样相当于题目有整整一半的内容没有回应，分数当然在5分段了。

注：我们✍写作月计划✍的第八天，会专题讲解如何判断题目什么部分需要回应以及如何回应。

2. Some people think nowadays children have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

提示：不知道你对于 children have too much freedom 这句话是怎么理解的。如果你理解为“小孩是否存在太多自由”，那么这篇文章你又写偏了。请注意，人家题目中说的是 too much，如果没注意到这个，分数肯定又在5分段了！

注：这道题目是2020.1.18日雅思考题，点此链接查看题目详细解析。

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跟雅思相比，你还是太单纯了！

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