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  国际诗人评论

Peter Hughes

 彼得·休斯 


The current group of poems starts with 'Old Photo’ by Ye Yanbin, a text that ponders the mysteries of time, change and memory. The photograph offers a glimpse into a moment of the past, a seemingly more innocent time for the poet when the hopes of youth were bright and strong, when experience had not taken its toll on youthful optimism. Yet even the photograph itself is subject to the laws of change and the poet describes its physical degradation as it 'turns even older / yellowed, dog-eared, badly creased…’ This is echoed at the end by the poet getting older in a world of increasing change.

本组诗歌的开篇为叶延滨的作品《老照片》,是一首思考时光、变迁和回忆奥秘的诗歌。看到这张照片,过去的某个瞬间在眼前一闪而过,那对于诗人而言似乎是一个更加纯真的时代,当时正值青春年少,对未来的期许是光明而充满力量的,彼时的经历也还没有毁掉年轻时的乐观。然而,即便是照片本身,也会受制于时光变迁的规律,诗人在诗中描述了其物理退化——老得发黄了起皱了卷了边角……”与结尾诗人在一个日益变化的世界中慢慢变老相呼应。
Han Dong, in 'Loved: a Narrative’, has created a moving evocation of a love story that was never really based on love. A man reads the diary of the woman who has left him. He discovers that she didn’t love him in the way he had imagined. Time has passed and he remembers the things they had done together, the warmth and affection they had shared. And these are the memories he values and holds onto, as recompense for a love that never really existed as such.

韩东在他的作品《旧爱——一个叙事》中创造了一个动人的爱情故事,而这个故事却从未真正建立在爱情之上。男人翻看了这个离开他的女人的日记。他发现,她并没有像他想象中的那样爱他。时光流逝,他想起了他们一起经历过的事情,以及相互间分享的温暖和情感。这些都是他珍视并封存的记忆,用以弥补那段从未真正存在过的爱情。
'Listening to the Unfinished Symphony by Franz Schubert’ is a poem by Zhang Zhan that celebrates the power of great music to arouse overwhelming emotions. The sense of solitude and and natural grandeur flows into a feeling of exposure and vulnerability, and a desire to join with a fellow human being to do justice to and share this music and the world.

张战在他的诗歌《听舒伯特<未完成交响曲>》中,歌颂了伟大的音乐能够激发强烈情感的力量。孤独感和大自然的壮丽感转化为一种外露和脆弱的感觉,以及一种与他人一起合理看待和分享这首乐曲与世界的渴望。
Chuan Mei creates a more ambivalent sense of mystery in 'The Addressee’. The reader is introduced to a correspondence which seems to be between two people who have been estranged for many years. Then we find that the speaker is actually writing to himself or herself. Has the writer become so different from their previous self that they now feel like a different person?  Is the past too remote to allow communication? The piece creates a very inviting and satisfying puzzle for the reader, a puzzle which only increases with the concluding lines, 'Now I must decide / on the best way to respond.’

川美在她的作品《收信人》中创造了一种更加矛盾的神秘感。读者被代入到了一封书信当中,看似是两个已经疏远多年的人在通信。接着我们发现,这实际上是作者自己在给自己写信。作者是不是变得和以前很不一样,以至于现在觉得自己像变了一个人似的?过去是否太过遥远,而无法再做交流?这首诗歌为读者创造了一个非常具有吸引力且令人心满意足的谜题,它会随着最后一句眼下,我在思考/我该怎样审慎地写一封回信而增多。
The fifth and final poem is 'The Contract’ by Han Zongbao. This is also the shortest of these five poems being just four lines long. These lines provide an extraordinarily condensed vision of life. It proceeds from the imaginative excitement of childhood where almost anything seems possible. This shifts in just one line to the 'blank page in middle age’ when life may seem tedious and empty of any real meaning. This in turn gives way to premonitions of death, life ending as suddenly and inexplicably as a dream may vanish.

第五首,也是最后一首诗是韩宗宝的作品《契约》。这也是这五首诗中最短的一首,只有四行。这几行诗句展现了一个浓缩到极致的生命图景。它源于童年时充满想象力的兴奋,在那时候,几乎是万事皆有可能。下一行就成了中年的契约是一张白纸,此时的生活似乎有些单调乏味,没有任何真正的意义。这反过来又让位于对死亡的预感,生命的终结就像梦境会消失一样,突然而莫名。

Peter Hughes July 2022    Bethesda

2022年7月于英国毕士达

国际诗歌评论人 | 彼得·休斯

诗人、创意写作教师,现任英国剑桥康河出版社资深文学编辑、剑桥徐志摩诗歌艺术节编委。2013年,他的诗歌选集与《对特殊事物的直觉:彼得·休斯诗歌评论集》('An intuition of the particular’: some essays on the poetry of Peter Hughes)同时由Shearsman出版社出版。他根据意大利经典创作了《十分坦率》(Quite Frankly,Reality Street出版社)、《卡瓦尔康蒂》(Cavalcanty,Carcanet出版社)、《via Leopardi 21》(Equipage出版社)等众多充满创意的作品,广受好评。彼得是剑桥大学英语系朱迪斯·威尔逊诗歌基金获得者、客座专家,剑桥大学莫德林学院在诗歌领域的客座院士。近期出版的作品包括:2019年的《柏林雾沫》(A Berlin Entrainment,Shearsman出版社)、2020年的《毕士大星座》(Bethesda Constellations,蛎鹬出版社)等。

  《诗刊》中国诗歌网 x 英国剑桥康河出版社

汉诗英译 

本期译者 | 秦尊璐、游心泉、彼得·休斯

本期作者 | 叶延滨、韩东、张战、川美、韩宗宝
老照片
叶延滨

老照片老了
老得发黄了起皱了卷了边角
照片里那几片叶子
早从树上落下了
照片里那朵云
也早飘得无影无踪了
那条流进照片的江水
在夏日暴涨又在冬日干涸了

老照片没有老
守着那个叫青春的日子
方方正正像一页日历
守着那幻想堆成的年纪
守着黑板上白粉笔写的道理
守着叫浪漫的那串记忆
守着这一张张不会装假的脸
青春守着青春的约定

老了是站在照片外的我
四周风景忙着变换戏装


Old Photo
By Ye Yanbin

The old photograph turns even older
yellowed, dog-eared, badly creased
The picture lost its last few leaves
in some autumn long ago
That ancient cloud
has disappeared without a trace
The river that flows into the picture
floods every summer, runs dry each winter

Yet the photo never really ages
remaining in the realm of youth
like the pages of a calendar
still holding stocks of faded fantasies
knowledge chalked in white upon a blackboard
the romances of memory
faces that had not yet learned to dissemble
youth still guarding all those youthful promises
What turns old is me, outside the photo
the restless world around me hectic with change

游心泉、彼得·休斯 / 译


旧爱
——一个叙事
韩 东

她从来没有爱过他
这是一个秘密。后来
她不再需要保守这秘密
但也没有必要宣布
留下一些衣物和一本日记就离开了。
她答应回来取这些东西
终究没有回来。
不是欺骗,更不是故意的
只是解除了警惕,秘密
像一个结在时间中松开。
当他翻看那本日记
犹如古墓中溢出刺鼻的气味
他也没有因此受到伤害。
只是稍稍遗憾。
他把旧爱理解成某种深情
她从来没有爱过
但他们之间确有情谊
因缺爱更让人难以忘怀。
那些他们一起走过的路
更具有抵达的目的
相拥和眼泪,是未曾抵达。
某种深情或者爱的渴望
宽广有如虚无。


Loved: a Narrative
By Han Dong

She had never loved him–
this was a secret, but later on
it was a secret that she didn’t need to keep
or broadcast: she just moved on
leaving behind some clothes and a diary
She promised to come back and collect them
but never did
It wasn’t a lie, or intentional
it just happened that the secret
unravelled like a knot as time went by
When he went through the diary
as though suffocating in the air of an ancient tomb
he wasn’t hurt
but just felt pity
He viewed their bond as a strong and deep affection
even though she had never loved
There were warm and amicable feelings
that the lack of love made more unforgettable
The journeys made together
became more meaningful
hugs and tears
of affection and a hunger for
that boundless love
that never was

游心泉、彼得·休斯 / 译


听舒伯特《未完成交响曲》
张战

我以前不知有孤独
我独处,沉默
却总有大鸟鼓翼随形
远山积雪
无穷春路
穷人也能嗅到玫瑰幽香
我的心总是轰鸣

我独自歌唱
只为了唱
唱就幸福
我不戴面具
有时我也隐形
透明

但有一天
有一天
听舒伯特的《未完成交响曲》
在一枚红色海螺里
我的心如螺肉
从螺壳中被拽出
我是舒伯特《未完成交响曲》的一个拓片
音乐是水
我是水迹

我那时非找一个人共听


Listening to the Unfinished Symphony by Franz Schubert
By Zhang Zhan

I didn’t know what loneliness meant
constant solitude and silence
accompanied only by a great bird’s outstretched wings
snow-capped mountains in the distance
endless paths through spring
the scent of roses free to everyone
and the persistent echoes of my heart

I used to sing alone
for singing’s sake
that made me happy
free to be myself
Sometimes I seemed to turn invisible
transparent

But then
one day
I listened to Schubert’s Unfinished Symphony  
with a red conch
My heart was like the creature from the shell
plucked out and exposed to all the world
I turned into the textures of the symphony
where music was water
and I was water’s stain

I have to find a fellow listener to share this

秦尊璐、彼得·休斯 / 译


收信人
川 美

你来信问:“你不记得我了?”
我回信答:“我无法确定记得的你是你。”
之后,我们的通信就中断了
像两个因战争而断了音尘的人
现在,面对一张闲置的邮票,轮到我问:
你还记得我吗?你还给我写信吗?
我把这两句话用楷书抄在打印纸上
又找来一个牛皮纸信封
在收信人的地方写上我自己的住址和姓名
在寄信人的地方只写了“本市”
封好,贴上一张1995年版的1元邮票
坐七站地铁去离家很远的一个邮局
郑重其事地投进邮筒
第二天上午就收到了回信
太快了!那么快,来不及等待
那张邮票又回到我的手上,像一只鸽子
带着勋章一样自豪的邮戳
眼下,我在思考
我该怎样审慎地写一封回信


The Addressee
By Chuan Mei

'Don’t you remember me?’, you asked in the letter
'I’m not sure you’re the same as the person in my memory’, I answered
there were no more letters after that
as if one of us were missing in action
Locating a spare stamp, it is now my turn to ask
'Do you remember me, and will you write?’
On the paper I write this sentence in a steady hand
and rummage for an envelope
on which I write my own name, my own address
the letter headed with only the name of this city
the envelope sporting an ordinary stamp from 1995
I take the subway to a post office seven stations away
and ceremoniously post the letter
surprisingly it is delivered to me the very next morning
without any delays
the stamp comes back to me like a homing pigeon
it proudly bears a postmark like a medal
Now I must decide
on the best way to reply

秦尊璐、彼得·休斯 / 译


契约
韩宗宝

少年的契约是一个五彩斑斓的梦
中年的契约是一张白纸
晚年的契约是墓地上的青草
青草在梦中 渐渐地沦为一纸空文


The Contract
By Han Zongbao

The childhood contract is a vivid dream
then a blank page in middle age
graveyard grass in later life
the grass in the dream diminishing to just a scrap of paper

秦尊璐、彼得·休斯 / 译

编校:寇硕恒、曾子芙;审核:彭敏;核发:李少君

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