我有话说
过两天就是高三一检了，看着日益紧张的可爱的高三党，我想我能做的就是下面这些了。以下是：
一、常州十校联考卷D篇阅读如何破？［我想告诉你如此超难文章的读文和解题套路］
二、用《写作王中王里》的知识去完成作文，先是我示范，然后学生习作一篇。
这是我最后一次用王中王1.0了，一是因为内容太少，限制了更好作文的生成；二是因为2.0版马上就在我的VIP使用了，会有全新的感觉。
假期，我将在苏派名师授课群里讲授：
新概念三、四精选15-20课；
110篇
高中英语语法串讲
同时《破釜沉舟》寒假班重点是阅读完形和写作突破，正在火热报名，读者参看：［老学员如果能介绍新学员会有优惠，新学员介绍同伴也有优惠，具体可联系我。］
飚记英语寒假《破釜沉舟班》招生 公益语法串讲课视频||千载难逢的30天寒假，你应该如何充分使用？首先，我讲讲此类论说文读文策略：
说理文该如何把握段意：
（1）永远只有一个中心，通常都在首末句。
（2）说理文的行文结构：道理 论证（举例；对比；列举）
特别提示：某一段你可能看得头晕目眩，但你只要看懂一句（最好是两句），那么它就是你的救命稻草。说理文的文体特点决定了，为论点服务的每一个论据都是具有高度统一性。你只要看懂了一句，那么其它句子的本质含义和它是相关。这就是我强调的：看不懂例子就看论点；看不懂论点就看例子；看不到定位段的答案就看论点。
下面这篇文章可以说比去年高考阅读D还要难，但是，你若掌握上面的规律就会发现能快速搞定。请记住：论说文，重点抓论点。请仔细阅读我的解析内容：
【1】The word tolerance is widely used in liberal democracies. It indicates a positive meaning. Politicians urge us to be tolerant towards minorities. Educators teach us to be tolerant towards the other. The press is full of references to the need to display tolerance when faced with individuals or groups espousing a different view or holding a different religious belief. A tolerant society is an objective sought after by anyone who believes in the values of democracy. Atolerant individual is attributed with virtuous qualities.
【2】The question we must ask is whether we have been using the word tolerance fully aware of itsmeaning and whether we have applied it correctly to reflect what we really wishto convey?
67. The firsttwo paragraphs are mainly intended to show that __________.
A. tolerance is a symbolof liberal democracies
B. democratic societyalways advocates tolerance
C. people’sunderstanding of tolerance is one-sided
D. tolerance can beapplied to many situations
段落
论点
论据特征
Para 1
第一二句：容忍是褒义词，广泛使用
列举法：政客、教育者、新闻界
下定义法：容忍的社会和个人各自定义。
Para 2
我们充分意识到容忍的含义和正确用它来表达吗？
解析：说理文都严格遵守按顺序出题的原则，那么就让我们读完第一二段看第一题。此题问的是一二段的目的。第二段属于第一段的文本推理总结。实际上，在论说文体中，前两段中出现疑问或转折时，即可判断：疑问句就是中心。C项说的是，人们对容忍的理解是片面的。第二段中的问题句中的“fully, really”即为作者的观点，像这种强烈的感情色彩词一定不能放过。情感色彩词一定反映了作者的态度。
【3】The word tolerance means to bear, or to bear with. If I tolerate something or someone, I basically say that I am ready to bear it or him. I can tolerate a badsmell or a noisy neighbour. The act of toleration forces me to stop conveyingmy objection to the existence of a phenomenon, which I find difficult to bear. A bad smell or a noisy neighbour is considered by me to be an objectionablephenomenon. By tolerating either of them, I am not transforming the bad smellor the noisy neighbour into positive phenomena. Let’s be honest: I don’t have adifferent taste when it comes to bad smells. I simply dislike it and wish thatit disappears. I don’t respect the noisy neighbour. I would rather have himstop at once the noise he is making so I can live in peace.
【4】To try toremove the bad smell or take reasonable action in order for the noisy neighbourto stop bothering me would most probably not be considered an intolerant act bymost people.
【5】Now, let’s try to apply the word tolerance in reference to a person who is law-abiding andholds a legally acceptable different view from my own. I may have a strong view,which is opposed to his. Quite frankly, I may decide to tolerate his view. By so doing, I would be attributing to it a negative characteristic. I would apply the same attitude to his view as to the bad smell or noisy neighbour. Thus, totry to take action in order to make his view disappear would be considered anintolerant act. To tolerate his view the way I would a bad smell or a noisyneighbour, could hardly be considered virtuous.
68. The example of a bad smell and a noisy neighbour is raised to indicate that __________.
A. the writer is fed up with them
B. most people find themhard to tolerate
C. the writer isn’tprejudiced against them
D. tolerating them isn’ta virtuous act
段落
论点
论据特征
Para 3
第一二句：容忍即忍耐。
列举法：有噪音的邻居；难闻的气味。
Para 4
本段是继续就上一个例子进行推理。请注意推理后的结论是不影响论点的，你看不懂问题不是太大。
Para 5
本段也是继续就例子进行推理，但是最后一句结论是文本内容总结，和上一段例子不同。注意这里的Thus。文本内容总结，是佐证和补充论点的，一定要重点看。
让对方的不同的观点消失时不容忍的行为；像容忍前两种行为一样去对待这种观点不是有品德的。
解析：题干问的例子example说明什么，这是典型的例证题。例子的本身绝不能当作论点的内容，故A项和B项说“厌烦他们”，这是例子的内容；C项没有提及；D项就是三段例子阐述最后的推理的总结。
【6】The subject tolerating is by nature not equal to the object being tolerated. If I tolerate you, I essentially say that I am above you and am prepared, although unwillingly, to bear with your presence or with your practices or opinions.That may be true in the case of an individual who is ready to tolerate the other. However, this attitude by such an individual, though empirically true,is hardly a virtue. Certainly, the fact that an individual, in reality, may merely tolerate the other or his opinion does not justify a government or any official authority promoting tolerance as a virtue. One cannot tolerate an equal being. True equality involves respect, not toleration. To respect the other as a distinctive person is hardly to tolerate him. This is the true meaning of equality: diversity existing in a mutually-respectful socio-legalsetting.
【7】The danger with tolerance is that it can lead to the acceptance of individuals or groups bent on destroying the foundations of democratic systems. We have seen such cases with regard to political parties or destructive religious groups that have been treated in a liberal manner under the guise of tolerance.
69. Which of the following will the writer probably agree with?
A. Too much tolerance will endanger the foundations of democratic systems.
B. By tolerating, people can transform something negative into the opposite.
C. People tolerating others are likely to consider them as their equals.
D. Being tolerant should be regarded as a right instead of a favour.
段落
论点
论据特征
Para 6
本段论点需要特别注意，因为中间有作者态度的转折。涉及到转折的时候，段落中就会涉及到一个论点的两个方面。首句：容忍的主体和受体是不对等的。转折后的：这种态度也不属于有品德的。
Para 7
首句：容忍的危险，即破坏民主的根基。
政党和恐怖宗教群体。
首句论点，作者用类推他人法；转折后的论点，作者用对比法，即平等和容忍的区别。
解析：A项明显和第7段意思是符合的，基本没有任何变化；第三段作者就说了，容忍是不会将对方的消极行为变为积极的，故B错；C项和第六段首句的论点相反；D项和最后一段首句论点相反。
【8】A tolerant attitude involves the grant of a favour, not a right. The question we shouldask ourselves is whether we would ever wish a parliament to make laws accordingto us, as individuals and as part of a collective entity or a permission topursue certain actions interpreted as a favour rather than a right? Indeed,would we ever wish anyone to listen to our views and accept us the way we aresimply because he is kind enough to tolerate us?
论点：容忍是施恩，非给予权利。
论据：立法的根据；别人倾听你的原因。
说实话，这个论据会让你看得不是很明白，但你知道论点的意思也足够。
70. The besttitle for this passage should be “__________”.
A. Toleranceand respect
B. What is tobe tolerated?
C. IsTolerance a Virtue?
D. Shouldpeople be tolerant?
标题方面的问题，基本都是紧扣：高频词；首尾段；各段大意。我们先综合一下文章各段大意：
容忍是褒义词，广泛使用
我们充分意识到容忍的含义和正确用它来表达吗？
容忍即忍耐，像容忍前两种行为一样去对待这种观点不是有品德的。
容忍的主体和受体是不对等的。这种态度也不属于有品德的。
容忍的危险，即破坏民主的根基。
容忍是施恩，非给予权利。
我们可以看出本文的结构：先说明大众对容忍的看法是片面的，然后用例子证明：大众的容忍是不在道德范畴的；最后说明有些容忍是有危害性的。可见，只有C项能说明。
作文指导
以下一段是我的示范，我简要说明：
阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
How many times have you heard the expression that most people spend more timeplanning their vacation than they do planning their lives. I would expand thatexpression by adding that most people spend more time 'thinking'about their vacation than they do thinking about what's important in theirlife.
While rest and relaxation are a must in living a balanced life, it's not whatwe were created to do. After all, the Master Creator took his R&R (Rest andRecreation) on the seventh day, only after six days of 'definitelydirected thought.'
Wallace D. Wattles, wrote 'There is no labor from which most people shrinkas they do from that of sustained and consecutive thought; it is thehardestwork in the world.' And yet it is the first and primary labor of achievement.
What is your life's purpose or your personal mission statement? Is it writtendown? Do you review it and think about it often? Is your life organized aroundyour purpose and a set of goals that support that purpose?
Without purpose and goals - definitely directed thought - you are like the proverbial 'ship without a rudder（舵）.' There is power in your purpose and in your goals. It is the power that takes you over obstacles, the fuel that pushes you toward the life you expect.
写作内容
1用约30个单词写出上文概要
2用约120词发表你的观点，内容包括
（1）读完这篇文章后，你会目标的认识是什么？
（2）你的近期short-term goal和远期目标long-term goal分别是什么？
（3）为了实现你的目标，你现在打算怎么做？
写作要求
1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构故事
2阐述观点或提供论据时，不得直接引用原文语句
3作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称
4不必写标题
第一步：如何概括
说明文或议论文：首尾段；
记叙文：抓时间人物事件，即：某人做了某事。
第一段：most people spend more time 'thinking'about their vacation than they do thinking about what's important in their life.
末段：There is power in your purpose and in your goals. It is the power that takes you over obstacles, the fuel that pushes you toward the life you expect.
请同学们改写：[此类体裁的文章，基本等同于改写首尾段；或者罗列一下每段开头］
Goals, ignored easily by many of, can guide us in the right direction, help us overcome difficulties and achieve what we want eventually.
第二段：
由于这是正能量的文章，所以避免不了要先整理此方面的常用词汇。［以下来自王中王1.0，这应该是我最后一次如此大规模使用，假期课程会注入全新血液。］
shape our values;
gain us an insight into ...
a source of motivation
justify our action
lay a solid foundation for...
pave the way for...
play a vital role in...
facilitate the cultitation of ...
上述的正能量词语如果不够，还可以反向论证，即：
Lack of ****will deprive us of the ....and frustrate our efforts.
注意几个正能量句型：
It is ...that...
The 比较级
好了，有了这些，我们来写第二段：
It is admitted that goals play a key role in shaping our values. They not only gain us insight into the world and society, but serve as a source of motivation. The longer we stick to them, the more likely we are to make a difference. Lack of goals, undoubtedly, will deprive us of the motivation to pursue our dreams and frustrate our efforts in the end.
下面写第三段：
我经常发现，学生写这样的提纲作文：某某是。。。，直接翻译。实际这样是不妥的。
Personally, a dream is nurtured at the bottom of my heart that I hope to be a doctor to allieviate many paients' caner. It is my long-term goal. Being admitted to an ideal university is my short-term goal, which can pave the way for the former.
最后一段：
写打算基本围绕：
study；
work out;
socialize with others;
Obey the law;
Appeal to others to do...
但同学们，每一点你都要有合适的高级词汇。
Thus, I will devote myself to study to euip myself with enough knowledge. Also, I'd like to give top priority to my health by making it a routine to work out regularly to build up my strength. Health, a guarantee of future success, counts for anything in fulfilling our goals. I am firmly convinced that only by doing so can my goals come true one day.
参考范文：
Despite the fact that constructing your future with goals is tough, it does make a difference during the process of your life, as it guarantees your right direction of constant achievements.
Personally, it can never be too true that life can not shine without goals. Nomatter what you do, so long as you are determined to achieve, goals arenecessary.
Everybody has his own goals with no exception of me. Being a man useful to societyis my long-term goal However, at present, to an ideal university is undoubtedlymy desire. Few people can survive well unless equipped with abundant knowledge.
In an effort to realize my dream, hard work seems the best and only choice. Not only will I make my study plans in detail, but the most important is to put my plans into real action. Only with great efforts can I attain further education and eventually step into future with great confidence.
学生然后针对常州十校卷的作文，模仿写作：
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Let’s face it. You are constantly exposed to common viruses. There is nothing you can doabout them. However, you can greatly influence the effect of those viruses onyour health. Don’t accept that the flu or common cold is something you have tosuffer from time to time. Cast off this thought and keep yourself and yourentire family healthy regardless of the weather or season. These easy tips willhelp you to reduce the number of times you are down with the flu or commoncold:
1. Eatplenty of fresh fruit and vegetables daily. They are needed to increase yourability to win the fight against common viruses.
2. Drink plenty of water. The water runs through your body, removing everything yourbody wants to get rid of.
3. Sleep 8hours per night. If you often fail to have enough sleep, not only will you feeltired, but also your immune system will work less efficiently. You will be moreeasily affected by viruses.
【写作内容】
请你用英语以“健康的生活习惯让我们远离病毒”为题写一篇短文，主要内容包括：
1．以约30个词概括以上短文的主要内容。
2．然后以约120个词谈谈你对养成健康生活习惯的看法，内容包括：
(1) 病毒的危害及形成健康生活习惯的必要性；
(2) 要保持健康，还有哪些可行措施；
(3) 倡导大家培养良好生活习惯，健康生活。
【写作要求】
